Black Poetry : ...Why Do You Want Me?...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'LL BE BACK ON HERE TO FLOW LIKE I USED TO SOON!! BUT FOR NOW I'LL LEAVE YOU WITH THIS....


    why do you wanna kiss me baby?
    what makes you wanna miss me baby?
    how come i’m treated like **** baby?
    when I’ve done all this for you lately?

    what makes you wanna touch me right there?
    then you just wanna act like you don’t care?
    what makes you wanna lay with me me tonight?
    knowing that we’ll always end this **** in a fight?

    what makes you tease me with sexy foreplay?
    and then how can you leave me on a day like today?
    what have I done wrong to make you so cruel?
    when I have practically done everything for you?!

    what makes you so sexy to me when you get mad?!
    I can’t help that i’m feening for you so [email protected] bad!
    at times I feel hatred towards you baby boy!
    but I know deep down inside your the one I adore...

    why do you wanna feel me baby?
    when it seems we are so distant lately?
    what makes you want to kiss me so good?
    and treat me the way you know a man should?

    then how can you turn you back so suddenly?
    I feel the burn of anger unsubtly
    I wanna run sometimes from you baby
    then other times I wanna hold your body next to me...
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i guess nobody likes this one....:(
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No, I like it Lovely. You have alot of ?'s. The ? is does he have tha answers for "u". At any rate, that was a very interesting flow. I can't relate, however, I did understand you whole heartly.

    Much, much love,
    Foxy............
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i almost miss dis one ......
    sometime our mindz wonder why, who & if
    the answers lay within
    seek deeper

    u have mastered some question i lone to know .
     
  5. suddenpassion

    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    That love and hate relationship..been there many times..girl im feelin ya on this one.
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody:D
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovely, so happy to see you, we are missing you but after reading this....

    I'm missing you even more.............

    feeling this one fa real!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this
    nice
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome and thank u sistah
     
  10. true love

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    I love this one. It's so how I've felt before. Thanks for sharing it.