Black Poetry : Why do you always make me cry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kitana, Apr 22, 2002.

  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you're not around
    and blue surrounds me
    I get this ache in my fingertips
    that can only be soothed
    by trailing my fingers softly
    across your skin
    in delicate love patterns
    touching you~
    what am I supposed to do
    when I reach out my hand
    to touch you
    and you're not here

    I cry

    when you make love to me
    so sweetly and tenderly
    filling my senses
    with the beauty of you
    making me feel complete within you
    skipping me through time and space
    until all else is erased
    in a second or a lifetime~
    in a moment of my
    dying in your arms
    from the intoxication
    of all that is you

    I cry

    when you take my hand in yours
    softly intertwining our lives
    or gently touch my face
    with butterfly caresses
    when you love me in
    every way with the little things
    you do and say to me
    when you make me feel beautiful~
    because I'm loved by you
    when you make my dreams come true
    by allowing me to love you
    what else can I do

    I cry

    (c) nfn 2002
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    K,

    Beautiful piece!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  3. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can only second GQ in saying that, this is a Beautiful piece
     
  4. Derrick Jay

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    lawd...got me reaching for tissue. soft beauty here...

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kitana

    This is a beautiful piece.
    I enjoyed the read.


    Scribeaboutit!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    sweet peace here.

    it's rare that women cry tears of joy.

    jh.
     
  7. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ..thank you for letting my words touch you...

    Shaz...thank you for feeling what I have written..

    DJ..didn't mean to make you cry, but if you did, then you understood what I wanted to say...;)

    Coco...you always support my work and I appreciate your words every time...

    J'hiah..it is indeed a beautiful thing, as is a man who is man enough to cry for his woman...it's so sweet when love can be like that...

    K
     
  8. Euphoria

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    I think the world be a an almost perfect place if everyone could find love like this.
    Beautiful piece Kitana. Your flow was smooth and the feeling sensual. Nice.
    *Emma*
     
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