Black Poetry : Why do I love an abusive man

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  1. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    God I ask
    why am I in love with a man that beats me in repeats?
    And yet people ask me
    how can I eat and sleep?

    God I feel used and abused
    Am I in love to lose?
    which path should I choose?

    God I want to be with this man of mine
    but if I stay
    what will be come of me?
    will I be crushed with his hands?
    I know moma told me never to settle for less

    but I ask
    where are the rest?
    I know you are not impress
    but he's the quickest love to my chest
    I wished he was the best for me
    he is my kids father

    Now I see he is like the rest
    he is my first
    but you say he is not my last
    and ever since he has been that blast from my past

    God I don't want to be alone
    that is why I act like me and this man belongs
    And if he leaves
    I will have nothing
    I will start to suffer

    Or is it the other way around?
    Please show me my loves ground


    :whip:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Upon the pain and heartbreaking shame
    many abused love feel this stain but there's
    a way a will , don't stay play in the game
    of bashing abuse........get out and leave
    theirs a greater need and love to be loved

    i feel this deep in my heart
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank u my bratha rich, im glad u feel this deep in ur heart, i kno so many plp like this, we can only pray and convinced them

    blackluv and bp
     
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    yes so true , so many are stuck in the abuse mold
    i hope and pray that some day it will all end and ppl
    won't get hurt , stain by the fist and tongue of another

    it hurts to see a woman getting abused .
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TRUE DAT CUZ GROWIN UP MY FATHA WAS VERY ABUSIVE TOWARDS MY MOTHA

    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    how sad , my hearts reach out to her wounds for healing
    sometime it can leave a lifetime scare and make lovin hard
    to move on from the battle of a relationship or marriage......
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i totally felt this one sista. thanks for sharing this flo on.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deeeeeeeep
    Your pen is pure venom
    This was like a rollercoaster
    Its was hot real hot
    Emotional joy ride
    Much Love Poet
     
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    Another great flo cuz. It stimulated my mind and reminded of where I've come from to be standing here today. I felt this real deep down in the essence of me. Thankz
     
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    Go head, poet. Som'n that defineately needs to be heard.
    One love
     
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