Black Poetry : why do i hate you...you say..

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Rico, Jun 19, 2003.

  1. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    why do i hate you...you say....

    the lies you told...to take hold...of me...
    the year...i lived...a life...that wasn't...
    truly...the played..out playa...mentality...
    the child...you had...that wasn't...really mine...
    the way...you act...now that we...are no longer...
    the sleepless nights...that take over...my life...
    the tears...i cry...cause you were my wife...the
    house...i own...but don't...really need...the walls...
    that stare...back at me...the weight...i've lost...now
    that...i am alone...the phone calls...i don't make...but
    cause's...my heart...to break...each time...i reach out..
    to you..but you..are not here...nor there...and the...
    moment...i realize...you don't...love me...

    why do i hate you...you say....:(
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hurt that pains,
    Destructive hate
    Flip the script,
    Love awaits...
     
  3. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    once again

    As I once said, an ellipsis can make everything seem poetic.
    But i'm feelin da strength and power of ur words also.
    Let poetry take hold of u and not let go.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one so of pain
    has much to gain
    the inner heart is
    broken but new
    love a token
    take hold of the joy
    a new day bring
    i feel dis been in this more then once
    but now i'm free to love & breathe again
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dam.....give it time Rico, give it time .:(:)
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Rico,

    I feel you on this one. I agree with SwtT, you must give yourself time to heal. Soon you will live without pain.

    All my best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    release that what you feel, as you flow, the healing begins... the pen take control to clear your mind, let it go..you have a beautiful Soul
    Peace
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin' ya on this flow!
    This is the kind of thing
    you rarely hear about
    for some strange reason.
    Peace to ya poet!
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is tyte....
     
  10. verse

    verse Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** i felt this...hot.
     
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