Black Poetry : why can't you just be?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, Oct 10, 2002.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i don't want your honest opinion
    nor your identity revealed
    can't you stay my fantasy lover
    until i'm ready to turn over and
    open my eyes to the sun
    peeking through the valance
    why must we speak of real things
    the truth has no place here
    cuz really you're just here to give me a high
    the high i lust after
    i lust after you
    that's true
    and don't say love
    because you don't and neither do i and
    when you kiss me i get hot
    i don't fall in love
    we don't have to tell anyone
    why can't you just be here now
    i'm not asking for tomorrow
    or the rest of your future
    why do you ask it of me
    why can't you just be?
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    -7 work that thang out then gurl...

    "until i'm ready to turn over and
    open my eyes to the sun
    peeking through the valance"



    diggin it



    One
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and to be why can't u just be here !
    see i loved dis one u touching my soul
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am enjoying

    your versatility....you keep hittin it from all angles, miss lady...provoking much thought. You have a way of leaving every possibility to the imagination, but ain't one line of truth eva in doubt.

    This is the sho nuff sho nuff (in other words)

    thanking ya kindly

    :)

    a
     
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    I've felt this way and will feel this way tommorrow.
    Deep speaks to deep
    Loving it
    Desert Storm
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling the yearning poet

    your work is definitely hittin' the spot

    DSS
     
  7. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin you Flower~

    Sometime that's all you want slim... Love the way you worked it!

    Reas
     
  8. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the luuuv y'all...
    sometimes i'm inspired by a mere word
    someone speaks... -7:spinstar:
     
  9. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hear you girl...times have changed huh? Used to be only them that said that to us, now we say that to them. With interest...this is Red.
     
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