Black Poetry : why can't she just understand?

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    why can't she just understand that
    it hurts me
    just as much
    as it
    hurts her but i must
    get out of her way
    because she has so much to accomplish
    so much to see and experience--
    without me--
    and i am willing to exchange my loniliness--
    for her happiness--
    yet she just can't understand why--
    after four
    years i could not
    wanna be
    us
    but
    i can't be us--
    cuz God said so and--
    i saw her with another man in my vision--
    and God don't tell inverted truths...
    (thass a lie to all those that don't know)

    i can't be with her because--
    it ain't in the stars for us--
    i can't love her like--
    she needs to be loved--
    and that
    hurts more than her misunderstanding--

    hurts more than watching her tears
    and knowing her goals and dreams
    and knowing that i am the weakest link--
    and thus...
    goodbye.

    life's too short for me to impede--
    or impose upon yours...
    go be great and i'll
    just be me--

    wallowing in your misunderstanding.




    sean.revisited.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man deeply felt u and how sad it is
    when we be misunderstood
    how we miss da after facts to lovin
    when we can't see past the reality
    only myth loom
    i know where u coming from i've been their ...
    let it all out !
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it seems like you are always there and giving good advice RICH. i thank you. I really really appreciate it.

    sean
     
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    what R bruthas 4
    man it hurts when love can't move upward
    and new starts begun and visions seen of
    heartbreaking
    we fade into hope of them understanding our
    emotions & feelings
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    not understanding how a man feels about you is hurtful when you love him. This scribe tells me that he did have feelings for me even when he didn't want to share them. I'm glad you wrote this...it helped in something I just don't understand about men and their sharing of feelings with others (not all men).
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm sorry

    :grouphug: sounds like somebody needs a hug.

    Life serves us all the wrong things, or so it seems. Poet there is alot to be learnt in life, some things we will never understand why they happen the way they do , but ultimately, there is a lesson. Its up to you to figure what it is.

    We all hurt, and four years is plenty to throw away. Your heart got you into this mess and it will take you right out. If you think its time to throw in the towel, do so but be her friend. If you think you should keep at it, there is alot that both you and she needs to put on the table.

    I wish all the best for you as you go along your own love quest. Funny but I have a similar problem as well...


    I'm Just sayin...
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    seanthepoet....thepoetsean

    I haven't read you in a while, but tis' sure great to be back read'n these proses of yourn!!!! :)

    I can relate all to well to this'n heah!!!

    N2
     
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    i'm not gon' lie da pain will probably go on 4eva.. but remember after rain comes clarity..and we can't always read our own stars..maybe u 2 will find greatness...and u 2 may not be lovers, but u don't have 2 b friendless... hope evrythang works out..
     
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    however you want to say it ....this is true love
    letting go , when you know its the right thing to do , for the betterment of the other .........




    ~natasha
     
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    I wish we could all say the one thing that would take all you're pain away, But you alone is the only person to do it, either let it go or pull it close. You said you had a dream, but maybe the Lord was letting you see, Not that you should let you're true love go,
    But only to pull her close.....
    The Lord works in funny ways and If this was ment to be, then the Lord will set you free and in you're arms she will be...........


    I hope this helps just a little bet, I was there once but he never came back
    But I did not ? the Lords work and please don't either.........
     
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