Quiet Poetry Lounge : WHY and WHAT is it U ASKETH !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    What is it of me u so desire
    that our love dem like da day's end
    forth art you my beloved , behold me
    as i stumble through such tymes

    I so stand as your victim and lover
    yet you not notice me there
    I may have played too long
    but i never miss a beat of thoughts

    For i now taste your lips
    i see beyond your eyes
    and feel you near my soul
    did u not know of my love !

    Allow me to wash my sins
    as i return wit a new day of direction
    bring forth upon u sweet affection
    and loveth thee beyond any compassion

    U asketh of something yet i not know
    U linger in words yet your eyes speaketh
    dat very touch send electrical waves
    my heart , soul and spirit feel

    you are my destiny , for my search is in you
    but why art thee closing me away
    did i not confess , or is it dat i simply ova looked
    facts of your love and your womaness

    Hear my cry my loveth, asketh of me again !
    this time i so will not hold death ear
    for sadness has shadowed my happiness
    without your love i'm not of exsistance

    What is it you asketh of me ?
    let me not walketh away but
    return upon thee tis new love
    as i weep in yo name .
    :bye:


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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful an heartfelt. I would think, that a woman would just ask a man, for himself, just the man that he is. Hey, but that's my 1.9 cents. Flow on poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u for ya 1.9 and i would hope most see it like u but so often they don't
    they see more and want more it's like getting water from a rock/
     
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    Your pen speaks volumes ...like always ...great piece poet!
     
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    Thank u my beloved sister .....da pen searching
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Likewise..............Thank u sister just like you .......Beautiful
     
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    And again i asketh what is it u seek from thee !!