Black Poetry : whuts goin' on sugah?

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have been--
    craving you--

    feeling us in parallel dimension--
    warm and sensual--

    where slow sucks--
    and long licks--
    lie--

    and passion is commonplace...
    touch creates--
    gods and goddesses unknown...

    whuts goin' on sugah?

    how's been yo' life baybay--?
    do i fancy your mind?
    have you been
    c
    r
    a
    v
    i
    n
    g
    me?
    hopefully,
    prayerfully,
    we have exchanged souls in--
    dark corners of your mind where sweat and unadulterated bliss--
    spawn from second thoughts...
    i've stole kisses from those lips-----
    haven't i...
    i rather the word--
    "borrowed"--you gave them back--
    i saw you -felt you- held you- smelled you- touched you-
    more then than ever--
    or more now than then--

    whut's goin' on baybay?
    how be's yo life sugah?

    i still cherish your essence--
    your breath, your simple being--
    come...clo....ser--
    c...l..o...ser
    captivate me in those eyes--
    imprison me
    make me live in thee--
    move me tenderly--
    let me--
    caress thee--
    gen-tel-lee

    whut's goin' on sugah?

    i see the ceiling fan twirlin' in ya mind--
    but ain't no circulation--

    lemme know whut's on ya mind!

    (just had to put down, excuse the length, very uncharacteristic of me.)

    sean
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SEAN! YA FLOW OF BEAUTY SPELLS OUT
    LOVE OF THE LAST MOMENT IN TYME
    I JUST LOVE THIS ONE .....U TOOK ME FOR
    A RIDE IN MY MIND OF SHE .......I STILL
    FEEL THE MOTION.....THANX
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SEANY!!.....

    1st of all to answer your question...
    ...there's nothin' new goin' on. :)

    now... this piece. i won't even go into great
    detail (but you know i could)... i'll just
    say that it was wonderful to read. every tyme...
    & i do mean EVERY tyme i read you i'm set adrift.

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sean

    "i see the ceiling fan twirlin' in ya mind--
    but ain't no circulation--"

    you betta stop. Neva apologize for the length. The depth and accuracy of this piece is cuttin me deep. to answer the question self reflection.
     
  5. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    check me out...

    ZoRbShUn-- self refelction? u aren't the only one...
    thanx for the read...

    GA_Sunshyne-- thanks for "Sunshowers" rain on me anytime...

    $$RICH$$- (bowing)thank u your highness.

    sean.
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    seannn, this is tyght!!!

    ~~simplydivinelovepoetry~~
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx LISTER!

    i'm watchin you...:cool:
     
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