Black Poetry : whoso list to cry*

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Oct 30, 2001.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tears stream
    and once perfectly-formed dreams
    turn vinegar-bitter--

    and

    shatter like fine china--

    millions of pieces that--
    ultimately
    comprised of
    one
    dream

    whoso list to cry*
    not i

    sean figure that dreams break sometimes--
    and it ain't nuthin that a lil' crazy glue can't fix...
    so what if it's in a million pieces--
    that gives patience--
    preserverance--
    strength--
    w i s d o m
    and better days...

    whoso list to cry--
    not i

    sean exclaims--
    who sometime be beat down by challenge--
    him get back up and throw up him
    bloody-ashy-flesh-exposed knuckles

    dust himself off and--
    finish him fight--

    whoso list to cry--
    not i--

    you might never see sean head-hanging--
    low in atmosphere--
    becuase him strong-minded--
    dogmatic--
    persistent--
    and
    true to his own--

    and so u should be.


    sean.
    :nuts:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i can relate

    feelin this deep and down my soul.....nicely done
     
  3. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks RICH

    it seems that you are always there reading...I truly appreciate that...thanks flyght man.

    :nuts:

    sean
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aight!

    this is tyte poet!
    You on fiya!
    preciate the read.:)
     
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