Black Poetry : Who's in your mirror?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by twision, Jan 19, 2006.

  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I stand in front of the looking glass
    Studying the image before me
    Seeing contradictions
    Seeking consistency
    Disturbed by its silent screams
    And loud whispers
    I see him...
    I hear him....
    His putrid thoughts spill through his eyes
    And yeild at his lips
    Darkening his aura
    His piercing eyes convict me
    Staring through to my naked soul
    He hypnotizes me
    With a silent demeanor and motionless stares.....
    Unwillingly I yeild my power
    As a sly unfeeling grin
    Disturbs the monotony of his face.....
    I close my eyes
    Yet his face stains the darkness
    I hear the looking glass shatter
    I hear his hand wrap around a fragment
    He tilts my head back
    And goes in for the KILL......
     
  2. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** twision that was deep and tight as hell!
    Great job boo!:kiss1:
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    could u hit me n e harder with that one?
    nicely put..
    ****..
    flow on!:hiya:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!! this was laid out tyte
     
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    I'm still lookin @ my mirror...very interesting flow!!!
     
  6. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks fam.
    Your love never goes unappreciated!!!!
     
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    love the way this flow so flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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    wow.

    poets and poetessess, you should see the boy flow..
    you should hear the music...

    *learning*
     
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