Quiet Poetry Lounge : Who's Crazy?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by queentswana, Dec 9, 2005.

  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Crazy or not, it worked in your favor
    I like your style...I dig your flavor

    And when I saw you on that plane
    I was the one that went insane

    I even ran behind you in the rain
    [email protected]! I must really be insane

    So I really don't know which one of us is crazy
    cause just like you, my mind got hazey

    That day we bumped carts in the grocery store?
    I knew you were there, cause I seen you before

    I came out, didn't matter what the weather
    cause I want you to see how I look in leather

    Call me crazy, call me insane...
    but somehow I had to know your name

    I love the rose you dropped at my feet
    that single rose...caused my heart to beat

    Am I crazy about you...or just plain crazy?

    This piece was written in honor of Oldsoul Earthday...taken from his Original poem "Am I crazy"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmmmmmm!!!
    good question i too wonder if i'm one of the two
    love this poetic flow right here
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some folks can have quite an effect on us, and so we may do some crazy things to get their attention. Enjoyed your flow.
     
  4. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    been there before
    when all sense of reality
    space and time blows
    away with the breeze
    leaving us with only the
    longing to know more,
    be more, love more....
    i just hope one day...
    somebody will ask themselves
    are they crazy
    about me...
    just hoping...
     
  5. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just Crazy
    Just kidding Queen
    Show him that Leather Sister
    Nice flow to The Brother Old Soul
     
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