Black Poetry : Whoa!!!! Relief!!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ox_6, Mar 17, 2003.

  1. ox_6

    ox_6 Member MEMBER

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    TAKE ME IN

    WATER
    CLEANSE MY SPIRIT AND ALL ITS COMPONENTS
    DROWN MY SIN AND SORROW BUT CLEANSE MY SOUL
    AIR
    SORROUND ME WITH YOUR PRESENCE AND BRUSH ME WITH FRESHNESS
    CLEANSE MY EYES OF THE SCENES OF SIN I SAW BUT LEAVE ME WITH MY SIGHT
    NOURISH MY LUNGS AND VOICE THEM AS IF THEY HAVE BEEN REBORN
    EARTH
    TAKE ME
    SUPPORT ME
    LET ME WALK UPON YOU AND GIVE ME NOURISHMENT
    TAKE ME AWAY AND LET ME EXPLORE YOUR ADVERSITIES
    FIRE
    DRY ME
    FEED ME
    LIGHT MY SOUL INTO AN ETERNAL FURNACE OF LIFE
    BURN MY WRONG AND TOAST MY RIGHT
    UNTIL ITS TASTY

    TAKE ME IN:cool: :cool: :cool: :cool:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Amen ! taketh thee openly unto da light of wisdom
    keep scribing
     
  3. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mighty words,
    from a mighty man.
    love the mode,
    i understand........(loved it truly) (add me)
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes...this is beautiful. This is a life's prayer...Something that you could repeat everynight for the rest of your life.....
     
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