Quiet Poetry Lounge : Who?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mrmofi, May 6, 2008.

  1. mrmofi

    mrmofi Member MEMBER

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    Simon says teach me.
    Simon says if you think im a vegetable Eat me!
    Bite me! See the
    guy in front of you, is eying not one of you
    because i am not one of you,
    i am one of the few;

    Green light, Red light!
    Im colder than some metal on a dead night,
    dead right and your head might
    combust if you cant fathom that im only bein true.
    I am not 1 or 2,
    i am one of the few;

    Ring around the rosie.
    I will step down when one of you devils show me
    that you can defeat moby
    dick like i did, so Ahabs go do the Dew.
    I am not part of your crew,
    i am one of the few;

    Ms. merry mack,
    I challenge you an i aint drawin back!
    I'll onomatopoeia a pallendrome, "TaT TaT"
    thats Black,
    the artist, namely dracula so you know what i drew
    i am proud for that hue
    i am one of the few;

    Teddy bear teddy bear
    if you under the sound of my voice then take this with you everywhere
    you CANT fly up high and breathe in heavy air
    down to earth, you neva there
    my soul is not yet due
    i am one of the few;

    Shame, shame, shame,
    they dont wanna here frome julian no more, more, more
    i would take you on a tour from the surface to the core
    from shore to shore, i am deep as the Blue
    an the answer to your WHO?
    i am one of the few...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed one in a few of many ...well expressed
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace & love wit respect

    continue to flow and glow in the wake of destee.com poeticly
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One of a kind, which is evident in this uniquely laid flow that I enjoyed reading.

    Welcome to Destee.com! Please aquaint yourself with our Forum Rules as well as our rules of Poetic Etiquette. Waiting to read some more from you.
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simon says, read you?
    Is it because you're one of the few?
    I can relate..cause I am the first,
    The creator and maker of the UNIVERSE.
    Without me, there could be no YOU,
    To even label yourself as "One of the few"
    Being cold as MEDAL, may very well be...
    But never lose sight, that you came from ME!!
    King of the Kings, and the deepest hue,
    Yes, it's pleasing to know ...that, you're "One of the few"​


    Hello mrmofi, welome to our home, which is now yours as well. I love the piece you did poet, :great: write, I'll be peeping for more.
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi mrmofi
    Welcome! Welcome! Welcome!
    I enjoyed the play ground drop of your poem
    It place me as a reader back in time, and then
    brought me forward again very unique you answer the WHO?.
    Nice One!
    Indeed we are all looking forward to your flowing more
    Much love
     
  6. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Being one of The Few
    You can NEver Lose to a Fool
    Rarest of you
    not even Twoed plus Two
    Bubble gum Bubble gum
    One Chose You

    Patty Cake Patty Cake
    Baked as I am
    Made into the image
    Of the the fewest of Man
    Only Official in Business
    So Cach me if You Can
    One Unique as Me
    Is destined for Master Plan

    Uno Doce Ano
    in a few short words
    Few short Thee's
    Three Plus me
    Me thus Seize
    The Power that be's
    Truthfully, I am you
    Tricky, you gotta find me
    in Healers near you
    One of the few
     
  7. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was great! Had me going back, back, back in time to the simpler life! Great piece poet and to all those gave tight flowbacks.