Black Poetry : Who Ya Hiding From?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Mar 29, 2001.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Candid expressions written all over my face

    Yet masked in disguise; not wanting the world

    to know my plight; lost in a cryptic masquerade

    I am a false pretense to realism; a liar to truth

    Caressed by so many; still I hide the pain

    Camouflaged disdain reflects the mirrored image

    Cloak and dagger mystique; a performing minstrel act

    My costume covers your soul and conceals your

    worth; obscure meaning delineates ambiguity

    Reach for my cover to run from your reality

    I am your fraudulent savior; master of trickery

    I am your ever present facade
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, I be he
    The one whom you see
    Never tough always easy
    Allowing you unto me

    Eternally yours till the end
    Soothing love I will send
    Softly touching your spirit
    Be you soulmate or friend
     
  3. Destee

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    WoW GQ!

    sooooo deep
    so very very deep

    thank you for this

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ...

    your versatility amazes...
    & still you manage to satisfy

    this line made me say "Dayum!"
    "I am a false pretense to realism"...

    L&R...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DES WHAT RICH TALKING BOUT!
    GQ.....DROP THEM LINES
     
  6. dnommo

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    GQ? GQ, is that you?

    for a minute there i thought someone was tryin to come inn under our name but then i saw the intricate delicate touch of the pen and realized no one could imitate the scribe of the Gentleman of Quality...

    beautifully written scribe
     
  7. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah D'Mo...that's right!!!

    The one called G
    Is filled with Q

    Ain't no smoke screen here!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  8. hypersleep

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    ill

    cool...

    very nice work...
    i've got to go read your other stuff!

    peace

    !Z
    (hypersleep)
     
  9. StarGoddess

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    hey hey now!!

    GQ....
    booooooooooy
    u know u got dat!

    nuttin else needs to be said!!!
     
  10. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Hyper and StarG...

    I can't hide!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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