Black Poetry : Who Would Have Thought?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by CasualFriday, Sep 20, 2004.

  1. CasualFriday

    CasualFriday Member MEMBER

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    Who would have thought,
    that I'd look forward to speaking to you each day?

    Who would have thought,
    that a warm, friendly embrace could bring such a smile to my face?

    Who would have thought
    that I'd miss the sweetness of your kiss... the gentleness of your embrace...
    the delight of your special place?

    I know it wasn't me, and I know it wasn't you.
    Can you tell me, who would have thought of such?

    When you're distant I want you near.
    When you're close I want you closer.

    I can't help but think of making love to you.
    I can't help but to dream of kissing your lips.
    I can't help but wonder, who would of thought of such?

    Who would have thought
    that something so wrong could be so right?

    Who would have thought
    that I'd sleep better after speaking to you at the end of the night?

    Who would have thought
    that something so right could go so wrong?

    Who would have thought
    that I'd toss and turn all night long?

    Just thinking about the sweetness of you...
    The grace and beauty in all you say and do...
    Unconditional, never judging, honest and true...

    Who would have thought?
    You?
     
  2. CasualFriday

    CasualFriday Member MEMBER

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    This is something that was on my mind and I needed to put down.
    It talks of no one or no situation in particular.
    But I can relate to something so wrong feeling really right
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I guess sometimes we want to try something dangerous, just for the thrill of it, but it's a good thing that logic tends to creep up there, doesn't it? Flow on.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yep who would of thought...this was a nice write...thanks for sharing
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is pretty - would be good to use for a visualization, cause everything you wrote is somethin I want.
     
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