Black Poetry : WHO U BE !!! talk to me see

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Who u be
    if u can't understand me
    who u be
    if ur not free
    who u be
    judging me
    who u be
    without liberity
    who u be
    in dis struggling maze
    and oppression
    that's in many wayz
    who u be
    speaking in tongue
    like some reinterpretation
    of our revaluation
    in our 400 years of heavy
    struggulation
    who u be
    telling me arts of wars
    and who win & who scores
    when unity is united
    in da land of free
    and bring forth reality
    who u be
    in this massive beat
    and are u ready to
    move and speak take it
    to a feat and hold life's
    treasures as our ancestors
    sleep and forefather's weep
    from da sins of our people
    trens of destruction within
    who u be
    working da streets
    feeding death inside our vains
    killing knowledge to feed our
    brains just tell me who u be
    putting da perm in ya hair
    for some silly ware and kill
    the gem of naturalism growth
    but u wanna be like ummmmm!
    Ms butterworth or bro. kirk
    who u be
    wit no claim but always coming
    to shame the harvest and tame
    who u be
    wit no true afro liberity
    and can't stand in da community
    to fight back and do what's right
    but always sheering light
    who u be
    killing me wit not harmonyyyyyy!
    who u be i ask
    can't u see we da people need
    to be free so let us be to live
    peacefully , respectfully , spiriturally
    who u be
    pointing fingers at me
    took away justice of peace
    replace'd it wit a destructive beast
    who u be
    stolen our smiles from 400 years of
    miles and beat da motherland known
    as A-FRI-CAN from tribes and family
    who u be
    hidding behind da mask
    in dis place call A-MERI-CAN
    we seem to be da same
    but where my realism from hold no shame
    but here all it do is blame and claim fame
    who u be
    we not da same
    AMERIKA is death land
    but AFRIKA is da truth & motherland of free
    da roots of our people tree
    the standard of liberity
    feel me hear da reality
    coz america is nothing but provertity
    given only provisional maze
    and think we should be happy
    nothing can give us back 400 years see
    so who u be
    telling me about some truth in liberity
    about some way to stay above
    about how we can join and love
    about my mother's mother and
    father of father's and i thy sons
    and daughters and sistas & brutha's
    who u be :nono:
    coz really u can't tell me $#!*%@ :censored:
    when we stll struggling in da pools
    of a society of socialization to be free
    so back up and leave me be before u
    become a piece of our history ! :deal:
    :maddd:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hot dayum!!!! dis was so tight
    i love when you just let lose and go deep
    flow head on!!!! flow head on!!!!
    this be the flow right here...
    open mind flowing yes indeed!!!!

    what ya say?...QQ
    who you be!!!!!!
    FEELING YOU Soul~DEEP

    ^5
    love it!!!!! :wink:

    Peace
    Angel :kiss:
     
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    who~is~she Active Member MEMBER

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    **** that was some deep eye openin sh#t.

    feelin the structure and flow of this one


    much luv.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz angel u know me my mind & vision go back and see
    what can't be seen by eye now but expressed da truth thank u

    who~is~she.......word up happy u can feel my motion and where
    i took this too and knoweth of our struggle and people our land
    of free so i thanketh thee openly and sweetly thankz word up !!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    TYME WE STAND AND MOVE IN UNITY AS PEOPLE IT'S OUR TYME
    TO RETURN HOME AND KNOWETH OUR HISTORY OUR MEANINGS
    OUR STRUGGLE AND WARS AND MOST OF ALL OUR GREAT DEFEAT
    TO VICTORY !
     
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    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww, where's my afro pick?
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see you're getting us to raise our fists in an outburst of pride with this one. You packed this one with power, and just let it rip.
     
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    get it out and slide it in ya hair
    and raise ya fist high in da air
    black power of cares and da
    love we bare in da march again
    coz time we people unite in trinz
    and hold unity in the communities
    stand up as leaders and not breeders
    stop da unjustice of peace
    and release us into freedom wit speech
    so walk wit me toylin today & everyday
    get ya pick out and slide it in ya fro
    thankz sistah
     
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    yes watzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
    rise up sistah raise ya fist
    sho da american we have da twist
    of affects to get back from da struggle
    and to thy mother of land which is da
    truth and light our liberity of sigh yes
    AFRICA sweet AFRICA
    coz we sho nuff be AFRIKANZ
    deep into thy roots of thy ancestor's
     
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    I tell ya da truth
    and not from da
    ms ruth but from
    da roots of da
    motherland and
    our father man
    i come in vibe to
    scribe da emotion from inside
    as we ride da waves of free
    and da speech of history
    feel me !!!
     
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