Black Poetry : Who really have the power……

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Life don’t always go the way you
    Want it…but somethings..hmmm
    Is what you yearn for..
    Others you work hard to achieve
    But the love of another
    Who really have the power……
    Can you see it in the eyes
    Or hear it a emotions
    Do you feel in a touch
    Who really have the power……
    the pain seems to travel
    Is it just they been hurt
    that the past wont let go…
    for the trust comes and goes
    the love flows but stops…..
    or is it just…..a thing that holds you deep
    that blocks your sight
    and brings light where it was dark…
    See in a distance as the pain travels
    But don’t stop the hurt…continues
    Who really have the power……
    Something that moves so sweet
    That takes your breath away
    Each time…why is it so
    much pain with it…hmmmmmmm
    Who really have the power……
    Do you find inside you
    Or the love you give
    Or whats given….
    What really releases the pain….
    How do you break away
    from the shatter of the glass…
    as the pain travels….
    Who really have the power……
    some may say you
    within you seek....
    but who really controls it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's held all in faith
    destiny is the power
    within self forth u hold
    da power to your fate

    tyte scribe
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that is true...
    but inside you hold this fate..
    when you release to hold another
    to share and give...
    but the pain reveals itself so strong...
    who really have the power
    when walls have been rebuilt
    and the hurt cant be bared....
    who really have the power

    thanks for the read....$$Rich$$
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is very thoughtful and beautiful, my sister. vibin your flow.
     
  5. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hope it's in me...loved the scribe j.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the power is always within
    just it struggles with
    the pain....much love thanks

    gempis and Jazz4u
    for the love....:angel1:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling you on this scribe sis
    much love
    point felted deep
    Peace
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sis Blue for da love...
    you have always support me..thank you
    means alot:angel1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Really felt this. I guess we all would like to think that we each ultimately have the power, but aren't really sure. Very thought provoking piece.
     
  10. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was definitely on point.

    I wish I had the answer.
     
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