Black Poetry : Who Is This Man?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Jul 1, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who is this man that un-nerves me so?
    Who is this that breathes in synch with
    me and who has birthed his essence in me?
    Who has given me life?
    Who's prints do I strive to walk in
    daily?
    Who guides me with sweetness and ease?
    Who is this man that un-nerves me so?
    I ask that question and settle back,
    smiling sweetly; a look of knowing on my
    face.
    I can't name a mortal man, but
    there is one.
    One...who moves me like...like,
    a warm knife through butter or the
    taste of caramel dipped almonds;
    he is so good for my soul and to my soul.
    Who is this man that un-nerves me so? You ask.
    Why he's none other than the Almighty God!

    ~Copyright 2004
    ~*PropheticNsyght
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ithgt flow:toast: I enjoyed it:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop fo real
     
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    very nice poem:)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Surely the truth, so poetically told.
     
  6. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man thank you all for your warmth and love! I love you all