Quiet Poetry Lounge : WHO is SHE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Who art thee
    dat has comfort me
    shower me in words
    so sweet
    that has my eyez
    captured
    who art she
    that's so compassionately
    making me feel ummm
    complete
    from da way she speak
    feeling her essence
    of a treat
    can it be thee
    da one i vision
    and dream in my sleep
    who is she
    can be you or you
    rapidly coming to me
    so willingly open and free
    I need to know
    before i blow
    and tell a story
    to my hearts glory
    i know not her name
    but feel her and da claim
    shame me not beloved
    forth i found you
    but yet not know thee
    who is she

    IS IT U ??????:donttell:
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can sing this piece and that's so cool cause I usually can't do that with soemthing i haven't written.
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She is me
    no name needed
    for you already know
    me intimately
    I'm there when your
    heart is filled with sorrow
    to bring you joy and
    heal your soul
    You've heard me speak
    if only on a breeze
    whispering your name
    while you're between the sheets
    your vision is extraordinary
    that's why you've seen me only
    in your sleep
    when you're heart is ready
    you will finally meet SHE...


    You've done it yet again brother RICH!
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know it aint me so it aint no need in my putting my 2 center in. but i wonder who is the lucky lady. she has to know she has her hands full.:kiss1:
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For I am thy rib
    Spirit to spirit
    Gentle essence
    Black pearl of hue
    Purifying water running
    Through the Niles
    A love gone unclaimed
    Compassion ally
    I read your words
    A million times
    Feeling the depth
    Seeking for who is he
    That takes my breathe
    Within the midnight hour
    Of a dazzling dream
    I want to know
    As my heart glow
    I pray every night
    Wondering…
    If he knows
    Before this story goes untold
    Like a vision in my sleep
    You know not who I am
    Within heaven’s eyez
    A vision seen yet unseen
    You need not know thy name
    Know only thy heart…

    Peace&Blessings
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now lets see
    can it be
    who is she
    is it you soulful2006
    that have me in this fix !

    TreasureEyes .....
    is it u whom got me
    mesmerized
    can it be
    is it thee
    break da hush tell me
    sweety is it thee
    hello come on talk to me !

    Choclatangel..................
    U say i already know
    from the warmth & encore
    from da sleep of my dreams
    is it u that it seem
    is u she dat make my heart ring
    tell me make a bling
    so da soul can finally sing
    intimately we are by heart
    is it u !

    Nevar...........
    what u mean it's not u
    what u say is it true
    can it be thee
    lay ya cents on da line
    let them speak in shine
    never say never in time
    who is she so divine
    is it u or do u think not !

    MzBlkAngel...............
    well well look at here
    can it be is it thee
    that has come for me
    is it you i seek
    the one i feel soft and meek
    inside my slumber so sweet
    hmmm ! BlkAngel speak to me
    are u the she
    that my solace meet between
    da silky sheets can it be
    is it thee .

    Thank you all for the view and shower of supporting love
    within yet i wanna know who is she that have me weak
    feeling something sweet in my day and even sleep calling
    lone only for me who is she , is it thee hello ladies talk to me...
     
  8. dajiboo

    dajiboo Active Member MEMBER

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    DA ONE

    Tis I
    Da one thou so adore
    Got thee yearning for so much more
    Da one who has no name
    For thine and mine art da same

    Tis I
    Da one who’s words;
    Caught thee by surprise
    Got tears runnin’ from thy eyes
    Da one who makes thee loose control
    Da very essence of thy soul

    Tis I
    Da one who obeys thy every command
    For thou art da man
    Da one who eagerly pleases thee
    Baby thou knowist me

    Tis I
    Da one who captured thee in cyberspace
    Though thou has never seen my face
    Da one who’s warmth thou crave
    Thine ultimate love slave

    Tis I
    Open up baby, tis not a mirage
    Let me free thy soul with a soothing massage
    Ummm…how doest thou liketh dat daddy
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dajiboo...........

    is it thee upon me
    the one whom openly free
    forth i am the king to be
    da one between ya sheets
    i've no not of thy face
    but felt the warmth and trace
    within my heavenly place
    up above i am
    cometh into my chambers so high
    share my world of wonder
    yes i love how u massage
    now let me fulfill ya heart
    is it u .....?
     
  10. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang dat was another deep flow my bratha rich,
    i mean dat is the question, who is she?..lol..well i dont even kno but
    flow on..wit passion

    **blackluv and bp**