Black Poetry : Who is she?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by gayluv, Apr 8, 2004.

  1. gayluv

    gayluv Active Member MEMBER

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    In the eyes of the devil
    Shines she
    She who stands broken
    Words spoken But her words never heard

    In the eyes of the devil
    She reaches out to me
    Calling for a peace of mind
    A piece of mind
    A piece of mine

    In the eyes of the devil
    She walks at a pace
    the darkness to her face
    The evil in her space

    In the eyes of the devil
    She glanced inside and seen me
    and it scaried me
    Oh Lord it scared me.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece was haunting. Write some more.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nicely done here u really send it in wordz
    flow on
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i liked this...flow one...
    :heart:
    -story