Quiet Poetry Lounge : Who is he.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Jul 4, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When he touch her
    He touches her soul
    Invades her mind
    Takes her dreams to another level…….
    Exploring every part of her

    The desire peaks, as she become weak
    As their love leaks…………in da air

    Upon her love he feeds, telling her she is all he needs
    Takes care of her like a fragile butterfly, lost in the wind

    He holds her …in the Virgo sun rising,
    As they turn in the Gemini moon and pass the River of starz
    They move towards heaven’s love paradise…

    Who is he?

    He was the one who caught an angel in black…
    Gave her a mirror to see…she is everything nothing less
    Took her dark and turned it light…holding her fears
    An ease her pain she once had….
    He is her everything…..inside her all…

    He is the love of my life
    My soul mate to my soul
    As I am his rib.....

    (C) 2004
    A blkangel thang​
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Have you been hit with the hammer too much? ...snakes don't have ribs.
    this was a very nice piece. I liked that.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol....i dont know about snakes but i know a man
    with a soul and a rib...:lol:
    you crazy.....you need the hamma....here hold still..:court:

    thanks for the support on this
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis here was deep tyte and real
    from da rib be woman !
    love dis one
     
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    "Took her dark and turned it light"

    Angel, this was BEAUTIFUL. Your pieces just float on the page.
     
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    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "As I am his rib..."

    **** that was tight. all I need to do Angel is keeping readin' your pieces and in a minute I'll know how to act...
     
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    So what are you trying to say queentswana ?


    This is a very nice poem angel...... :spinn:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What he does to you sounds almost magical, tight drop.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks!!!

    $$RICH$$..glad you likes the read.... :spinstar:

    jazzymoonchild..thanks sis i am happy you enjoy my poem i likes yours too
    ....and he is my strenght...... :spinstar:


    7thPoet...lol fo real now thas a new one but he is a man of his word and he takes care of his :angel1: ....wit pride as i do him... :spinstar:

    caramelpython..i feel ya...thanks for the read happy you enjoyed it.... :spinstar:

    watzinaname..far from magic....just real with his :heart: and thas dat....
    ...thanks for the read :spinstar:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Something can be real and seem magical, because of the way it makes you feel, like you have to pinch yourself to remind yourself that it is true.