Khasm13 : who is dis at my door???

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  1. Khasm13

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    chill'n in boxers
    and a wife beater
    i just poped in a vhs
    and sat down on da 2 seater
    blazed and L that neva tasted sweeter
    afta a long day at da gig
    now its time to relax my wig
    and embellish da laziness like a pig
    when out of no where i hear
    knock knock knock
    all up in my ear
    knock knock knock
    i haven't even cracked dis beer
    knock knock knock
    do they smell da gonja in da air
    knock knock knock
    so what, i don't even care...

    i open the door
    and internally i swore

    yes, i'm here to invite you to our church
    then from out of her purse
    she gave me a flyer
    the love of God will take you higher
    then your drugs
    Jesus awaits all at the pearl gates
    with hugs
    but only the ones that look to him for salvation
    the new testament is heaven sent
    and is the voice of our meager church nation
    we have service everyday
    and we will show you the right way
    c'mon do what's right for your soul
    and join our frey
    life is short
    there is no time to play
    only time to give praise
    too the come'n savior
    from the smell your behavior
    you need to be tempered
    by the will of the Lord
    c'mon to our church
    your souls salvation i know you can afford....

    as i stand in my doorway
    i am simply agast at what this young lady had to say
    my high was blown
    by the seeds she had sown
    or at least by her plough
    that's when i said
    how
    can ye judge so freely
    without even know'n thee
    yeah i smoke weed
    doen't mean i am a devil in the Lord's need
    for God, my body, my heart and my soul will bleed
    and his will i will neva supaceed
    i don't believe in church
    most people that go, deeds are worse
    than mine
    the Lord's shrine
    is in my mind
    we talk on da daily
    that's why my vision is neva blind
    i could neva be a sheep
    because my thirst for knowledge is
    neva weak
    thank you for your
    semi-kind invite
    but
    i have to do battle
    with these demons trying to smite
    my insight
    with diversions
    to have me swerve'n
    on a two way street
    try the cat upstairs
    his mental is kinda weak...
    <<<slam>>>
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected]...i'm really likin' this...i enjoyed the read:)
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i enjoyed this too...it was like you were telling a story and it was cool...i get your message also, loud and clear and i agree a lot of people are quick to judge because you don't go to their church or you don't do what they feel is the right thing all the time...nobody on this earth is perfect that's why jesus was sent to die for our sins...if there were such a thing as perfect people, we wouldn't need God so badly. so yeah i feel your message. keep it flowin
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayum - we must live in the same neighborhood (LOL). Loved this!
     
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    (ok.......where do I start)

    well first (God forgive me) I had this image of you in the wife beater and boxers...lol :blush: :D (God please forgive me)

    But then you took me on this journey...I must say that it is in my
    opinion that the Divine deals with each of us on an individual basis
    and it's not about religion it's about salvation....and the convenant
    that you maintain with him....yes churches have their "issues"
    as all forms of organization...but were not all evil....just human
    I have in depth essay on the words that are spewed from
    saint's mouths, that are insinsitive...obstructing their ability to
    draw anyone

    they have the zeal but lack knowledge and with all knowledge
    we must also have understanding...I'm on a campaign for a new
    more educated, strategic...21st century saint...maybe one day
    I will share.........signed the "preachers kid" that was feeling your
    work....as usual you raise the bar :bowdown:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:

    Khas, I love you sooooo much for this one. (tight as hell, too!) People should quit tryna push their beliefs on others and clean up they own yards. Tell it, man.
     
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    dayum...my brother...may i call you brother..
    this was tight
    i feel this all the way...
    you work dis right here....dig dat....
    love this read
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yeah......you dropped it on them with this one khaz.....
    i always tell people stuff like this....
    ya cant judge a book by its cover,let alone judge....
    thas His job........lovin this story and message dawg.......


    one!!
     
  9. POETIC BABI

    POETIC BABI Active Member MEMBER

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    Nice piece and I definately feel u on it!
     
  10. triniti424

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    LoL I agree wit Angelic...it took me a while because i was stuck after "...and boxers..." :eeek:
    Okay...now that I've had time to cool off... LoL

    yeah
    have you eva seen
    a "saint" with no sin - squeaky clean?
    well i guess
    I should be in distress
    since you claim I'm damned to he!!
    because you know me so well
    and you searched my heart
    knew my soul from the start
    but out of my curiosity of things
    I must've missed your angel wings
    "He that is without sin among you, let him first cast a stone"
    oh was that something u hadnt known?
    that my minds span was already in the zone
    physically young but spiritually grown
    Ummm...where you goin?
    I thought you were about to have me spiritually growin
    oh well
    guess I'm still goin to he!L
    *******
    You think U got it bad...I usually get the "this is a BIBLE" people...
    like I was born in Sodom and Gommorah or somethin lol

    you always manage to spark thoughts :) and I sho do likes it LoL
     
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