Black Poetry : who i be

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by quiteill, Sep 7, 2001.

  1. quiteill

    quiteill Member MEMBER

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    i call myself quite ill
    but u can take me like a pill
    three times a day
    as if my name was benedryl
    don't wanna come off conceited
    jus wanna show yall me
    i spit whateva i feel so i'm as real as can be
    i'm kinda new here but i hold my scribes near and dear
    flowin' and scribin' make it sound ill in ya ear
    wanna make it clear
    i bust 3-65 a year
    i'm true to dis game so yall got nothin' to fear
    i won't attack nobody wit derrogative rhymes
    and i won't drop flowz that'll waste ya time
    time is limited and there's none to waste
    i'm on this site so that yall can give me a taste
    of this poetic mastery
    none of that blasphemy
    i show luv to all
    all show luv fo me
    thanx to all fo takin' time outta ya day
    to read the phrases that i could not say
    but anyway
    i'm gon continue like a saga
    like James Brown say Papa
    got a brand new bag
    i'm printin' this like a mag
    on poetry
    do ya feel me
     
  2. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a wise man once said...

    "when you enter a room, change the environment..."

    you have entered well strong scribe...We welcome you...
     
  3. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome

    :wave:
    very much looking forward to more !
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    TAKE U IN WHOLE

    AS I HOLD SO BOLD AND WELCOME U
    TO DESTEE'S PLACE OF LOVE AS I ROAM ABOVE
    LOVING YA FLOW HIT US WIT MO!!!!!!!!!!:D :heart: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  5. poeticdelight

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    welcome illman

    windy city flows in poetic motion





    :) :roll: :toast: ':x:'

    ':cool:'
     
  6. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Passion,Music,Dreams & Destiny

    Dreams,

    Out of the blue
    Ability to envision
    Power to dream
    The impossible
    And do

    Passion,

    Created in one mind
    Able to stand the test of time
    Often mis interpreted
    Often mis understood

    Driven,

    To do so much more
    With the skill
    That comes from being mature

    Will,

    Designs a plan
    Dreams of a desired position
    One day will be granted

    Intuity,

    Observasion
    Of surroundings,

    Art that creates a pleasurable
    Expierience

    To the senses
    And communicates
    Beyond the physical realms

    Honorable,

    Mentionable,

    Passion,

    Desirable

    Loving

    Existing

    And spirits soar

    Free to be beautiful

    Self expression

    With out a care in the world

    Of what others think

    They can think what they believe

    And in it's entirely

    Miss out on the glow

    In opposition

    Unable to reach higher goals

    Transform

    Unikely

    In to a super hero

    And achieve

    With realistic dreams

    Able to ascend into higher hights

    Beyond the common goal

    Destiny,

    There's a place for us

    Underneathe the stars

    In between the lines

    In between the bars

    Of the music

    My art ,
    Poetry
    And views

    Possesing my soul

    Passion,Music,Dreams & Destiny
    Passion,Music,Dreams & Destiny
    Passion,Music,Dreams & Destiny
    Passion,Music,Dreams & Destiny

    Spun into gold

    Woven like a seamstress

    Putting together odds and ends
    And creating something

    Past visions
    Recollect

    And become part of the future

    The present

    Become my art
    My creation
    Expressable
    Expressing
    The passion
    And drive

    Expressing
    My background

    Expressing
    The anger,bitterness,and hate

    Expressing
    Infatuation

    Expressing
    Rythmical undertones

    Glossed over
    With spiritual undertones

    Beat moving through
    My head

    Melody
    Brings

    Words to life
    Create a story
    Create a picture

    Understand
    Understand
    Understand

    My portrait

    Fate

    was designed

    Fate

    Makes me blind

    With fear
    And joy
    And laughter
    And sadness
    And a stranger
    In my own land

    Passion,Music,Dreams & Destiny
    Passion,Music,Dreams & Destiny
    Passion,Music,Dreams & Destiny
    Passion,Music Dreams & Destiny

    Enjoy my masterpiece
    Enjoy my masterpiece
    Enjoy my masterpiece
    Enjoy , Enjoy, Enjoy

    My, My, My,

    Masterpiece

    ...

    Desert Storm
     
  7. Destee

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    Thank you for joining us
    introducing yourself
    sharing your flow
    you're at home ya know :wink:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  8. quiteill

    quiteill Member MEMBER

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    thanx to all

    i wanna say thanx to da whole fam fo showin' much luv to a young bruh tryin' to get his scribe on. Especially u D.S. for that strong and powerful reply. I feel that.
    THANX ONE MO 'GAIN DESTEE FAM. I'M GLAD TO BE ONE OF DA BABIES OF DA BUNCH.
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel ya'.

    i searching for ill floers here..
    peep MADDRAPPER.

    dun of poetry,
    jh.
     
  10. quiteill

    quiteill Member MEMBER

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    much Luv JH

    imma look ya up 2 see some of dem floes aight. so make sho ya hittin' me hit em. aight. holla at ya boy.