Black Poetry : who have the right

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this world can be so cold…
    as it unfolds and you
    try to define
    full of envy and dismay
    so who give you the right
    to lay blame….you
    go to church on
    Sunday….
    Bible Study on
    Wednesday
    tryin to
    preach the word
    but cant live by it
    and you try to judge
    whats right and
    wrong for others
    fake friends
    fake holy leaders….
    haters and
    those who prey
    on the weak….
    cant leave you out....
    have you ever tried
    looking in the mirror…and
    look thru the windows
    of thy soul..
    for the truth…
    as it unfolds…but
    still tryin to define….
    What is me instead of you
    We are who we shall be
    so who give you the right..
    to change some ones belief…
    by layin grief….
    don’t that make you wrong?
    confused maybe....
    but you still try to judge….
    this world can be so cold….
    look in thy soul
    as it unfold
    still tryin to define me
    instead of you
    Be thankful
    and answer your own..
    you cant change the game…But
    this is our world
    if you want a change…
    look in the mirror and
    start with thyself…
    and a change will begin..
    HINT.......
    until we come together as
    a people for the people
    instead of serving self..
    we will never
    have complete unity
    but it must start within....
    build a better you
    for a better tommorrow

    untitled life
    a blkangel thang.......
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some people can't look into the mirror because it's cracked. I hear you, divided we fall, and do often, unfortunately. nice write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    someday we shall unite in unity and stop the great fall
     
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