Black Poetry : who do you think you are?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Oct 21, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes I wonder
    who you think you are
    enslaver of my screams
    shackled and bound
    tied to insides of your
    uterus

    I have been there / been
    born again /still there /
    waiting to be reborn
    as the knots in your thighs
    as you come/cum

    and furrow my back
    with your nails
    trying to harvest your name
    from my throat
    in broken syllables
    in between uteral pulses
    and kisses

    who do you think you
    are? dictator of my emotional
    country
    autocratic laws that involve
    me expressing exclamations
    of penial sensations
    your lips twisting my
    vision like locked hair
    and I see many of you
    judging me to be guilty
    of enjoying you too ****
    much...

    who do you think
    you are?


    Blak Queen.

    (c)2002 blakverb
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    don't know but verb sound like she's trying to control
    da motion of da waves seem like da Queen is making
    a statement loud but it's now who she be but who u r
    now who do she thing she is !?
     
  3. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    garrison.


    umm hmm! i read this last night... but i was just too
    **** tired to respond! i LOVE-did it!! you are madd
    talented, yourBLakhighness... & i'm feelin' your flow.

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  4. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I say amen to elayne...you got it going on and I was lovin' this piece!
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now this is my morning cafe` mocha...
    so dark rich and delicious...
    who do you think she is? -7:spinstar:
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovedid it!!! Nice!!!!....
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well ****. this is hot!