Black Poetry : Who Did This To Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lpoet, Apr 25, 2002.

  1. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My mind they try to amputate it
    Many have come before me but
    in the past Three years I’ve even
    seen them hate this
    And I wish I didn’t have to come here
    and share with yall my
    Hopes,
    dreams
    past loves and
    fears
    but this is all I got
    this is the only way
    I know how to shed my tears
    and for years I watched so called friends
    try to bring me down with their lies
    and wait patiently in anticipation of
    lonelypoets demise,
    but I bet them same people
    couldn’t stand the glare of
    my brown eyes
    eventually engulfed in my body and
    Left to roam the perpetual hallways of my
    Perplexed mind
    sometimes I wonder why
    so much strain is held on
    my shoulders and sometimes
    I plead to god to make my life be over
    Scribin…………….

    Getting it off my chest…………..
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    scribe on poet .........let it out coz so many try to cramp ya style
    yet above u keep movin so shout!!!! let it all out ! flow on .......
     
  3. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tryin to rich but its hard with so many hatters tryin to hold
    me down sometimes................

    ya feel me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed we all have these kind of fans yet can't hold down
    whats real ........keep ya head up and move forward soon
    u will shake lose all ya mis fit...
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE GONE HATERS!

    BE GONE HATERS
    AND NON-RELATERS
    YOU CANNOT SEE
    THE BEAUTY FOR YOU
    HAVE BLINDERS ON
    SO BE GONE...

    THIS LONELYPOET SONG
    IS NEEDED ALL DAY LONG
    DO NOT IMPEDE HER FLOW
    CAUSE YOU HATE WHAT YOU
    DON'T KNOW
    SHE SIT'S ON A POETIC THRONE
    SO BE GONE...

    LONELYPOET LET IT FLOW
    AND LET ALL THOUGHTS OF
    THE HATERS GO...
    JUST DO WHAT YOU KNOW
    AND WHEN YOU LOOK
    THEY WILL TURN TO STONE
    AND ALL THE "HATERS BE GONE!"
    BJS(c)2002
     
  6. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for showing love msluciousb
    but um
    i'm a he not a her
    lol
     
  7. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flow On

    There's a feeling like this I know all too well,
    Suddenly raptured away in memories
    Left to drown in my misery...
    Thanks for the read!
    Desert Storm
     
  8. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got some folks in my life that remind me of this.
    Tight read but don't let the haters unmotivate you.
    Vent on, we're listening!
    Eternal
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LP.


    you know i love you... right?! :)

    thank you for continuing to share your soul.
    i enjoyed the read... as usual. & this is what
    i want you to practice sayin' to all those that
    may try to steal your joy:

    "don't hate!... it ain't cute!!"
    (or i could beat 'em up for ya!! :wink: )

    :heart:
    elayne.
     
  10. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Storm- i think we all have been there before........thanks for the reply
    eternal- trying to shake them hatters off

    GA I LOVE U TO
    LOL
    "dont hate!...it aint cute!!"
    you silly