Quiet Poetry Lounge : Who Cares?

maxon

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WHO CARES,
WHEN THE PRESSURE OF THE WORLD,
CRUSHES YOUR SPIRIT LIKE THE CURL,
OF A BODYBUILDER LIFTING A WEIGHT,
BY THEN IT'S ALREADY TOO LATE.

WHO CARES,
IF YOU WERE TO SUCCEED OR FAIL,
YOU'D BE BETTER OFF IN HELL,
THAN TRYING TO PERSIST AND INSIST,
IN A WORLD WHERE YOU DON'T EXIST.

WHO CARES,
IF YOU PLAY BY THE RULES,
TRICKS WE LEARNED IN GRADE SCHOOL,
OR IF YOU LIVE OR YOU DIE,
GOTTA GO, SEE YOU, BYE BYE.

THE QUESTION IS, WHO CARES?
YOU TELL ME.
 
Hmm, food for thought. I have felt this way more times than I'd care to admit. Self love is important, when it comes down to it, who else do we have but ourselves? God is love, truly. And if you have those in your life who really care how you are, be they family or friends, then you are truly blessed.
Nicely posed, very sad though.
 
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