Quiet Poetry Lounge : Who Cares?

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  1. maxon

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    WHO CARES,
    WHEN THE PRESSURE OF THE WORLD,
    CRUSHES YOUR SPIRIT LIKE THE CURL,
    OF A BODYBUILDER LIFTING A WEIGHT,
    BY THEN IT'S ALREADY TOO LATE.

    WHO CARES,
    IF YOU WERE TO SUCCEED OR FAIL,
    YOU'D BE BETTER OFF IN HELL,
    THAN TRYING TO PERSIST AND INSIST,
    IN A WORLD WHERE YOU DON'T EXIST.

    WHO CARES,
    IF YOU PLAY BY THE RULES,
    TRICKS WE LEARNED IN GRADE SCHOOL,
    OR IF YOU LIVE OR YOU DIE,
    GOTTA GO, SEE YOU, BYE BYE.

    THE QUESTION IS, WHO CARES?
    YOU TELL ME.
     
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    Hmm, food for thought. I have felt this way more times than I'd care to admit. Self love is important, when it comes down to it, who else do we have but ourselves? God is love, truly. And if you have those in your life who really care how you are, be they family or friends, then you are truly blessed.
    Nicely posed, very sad though.
     
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    welcome

    welcome to destee.....:wave:
    enjoyed this thought placed..
    hope to read more...welcome again:wave:

    flow on.............
     
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    welcome welcome welcome

    welcome to the quiet flowz of destee's
    welcome to this mental flow as u scribe
    happy u here upon us come check us out in
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    :) :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  5. maxon

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    You said it right, God is love. I think we all feel like this sometimes. The way the world is going nowadays, most people don't care. They want to get their's first. Bleep! Everyone else. Glad you enjoyed the read.
     
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    Thanks. Enjoying all of the threads I have been fortunate enough to read. Keep the flow flowing.
     
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    I will check out the live flow. Thanks for the invite. Keep flowing. Keep the flow alive.
     
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