Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, Apr 3, 2009.
You broke it down! You told of the blind past, the sighted present and the envisioned future!
Those are words to live by!
I enjoyed reading this and I OVERSTOOD, it took me back to dayz in the projects, out the window sales, and sitting on pieces of steel, whose only gifts were 10-20 life. I look back on those dayz of yesterday, and know that i wasn't living at all. Just days rushing on top of days to make up a tomorrow, that became a today, where I finally live. Peace and Blessings, I Feel you.
I love this right here and I love you DSS
but u already know that
keep it flowing my brother.....
dang can I live ... lol
comin to nyc sometime soon... c u when i get there!
yo this reminded me of oc's born to life a lil bit...
man...ur pen keeps getting mightier brother....
man u took me back and lift my head str8 up this was deep in depth and mad tyte
ya telling a world story here in such few words
Loving the rhyme scheme in this, btw. We're existing, but are we really living? Much food for thought So'ja, keep poetically keeping our minds alert, well done.
Warrior of Artistic Fire, what a way you have with words. If words could capture the wild elusive wings of song, would many not be perched in your silver cage chirping a hymn of appreciation? Please understand that religious discipline and self-restraint can hardly shackle the surging emotions that erupt from the deepest reservoirs of the soul when one's heart whispers and sends such divine phrases with such soft syncopated rhythms as you have written.
I really dig this piece!
thank you poets
CB - thank you for the ovation
LN - thank you so much i'm glad you're "living" thanx for OVERSTANDING
ML - you can live thanx for the love
K13 - thanks for comparison i appreciate, i'm trying to create my own
$$RICH$$ - wow if i can do that, then that's saying something thank you man
Watz - i love food for though don't you lol i know you do
Soulosophy - thank you for feeling the "energy" of this work because
you know where this come from that "energy" thank you so much
your words were well received
Coco - i digging the fact that you dig this piece thank you where you been?
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