Black Poetry : who be buggin'.....yea ME!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LURK, Nov 18, 2003.

  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This tropical haze
    got my mind in a daze....
    just seen tha labryinth maze....
    and look......there goes david bowie....HEY!!!
    you know tha kid be buggin'....not 4 nuthin'...
    but i be stressed on tha daily
    so let me live for a moment while i be smokin'.... :yo:
    mind free of all those thoughts
    brought on by anxiety...
    i have thoughts of all sorts
    even when in full sobriety...
    But right now i'm just enjoying this time
    enjoying this rhyme
    enjoying my life
    holdin' my babygirl....blowin' kisses at my wife....
    its a crazyworld...but knowin' you dont have to live trife
    like tha rest of tha flock...you know it dont stop....
    herds and herds of these sheep stay blinded...
    i stay findin'.....anotha way to stray away from them lame tryin'...
    to put me down just when i am up....
    I smell jealousy and envy i guess it easy to see
    that they enemies to me..........so whut???

    right now i'm chillin......................who wit me???

    :wave: :roll:

    anothaonthaspotproduction [email protected]
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like your flow...
    sort of free and upliftin

    now ya know them sheep need a sherpard
    for they no not where they go....

    but its all good i enjoyed readin you :angel1:
     
  3. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin dis flow
    GOD BLESS :angel1:
     
  4. Khasm13

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    im wit ya holmes...
    keep pop lock'n
    da verbs non stop...word
    peace
    khasm
     
  5. PositiveMindset

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    I'm witcha dog.

    Sometimes seeds do that to you.

    Isn't it nice to be at peace in a world of turmoil.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u know i felt dis sho nuff wit ya here
    drop it .............................................
     
  7. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like....
    nice skrybe.....






    Love l
     
  8. MsGhettoPoet

    MsGhettoPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm wit u brotha lol. Um feelin this piece right here :shades:
     
  9. angelicsage

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    hey..you got me
    mind totally free
    the only way to be
    nowadays!

    This was coooooool! :glasses:
     
  10. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im with u!!

    this is tyte, im lovin the rhyme scheme...
     
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