Black Poetry : Who are we to judge...........

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who are we to judge
    when did we also became the juror

    I tell ya it saddens me that some of us display this hate
    You may not like what I'm about to say

    But I never in my life seen so much hatred
    The smell of it is almost smells outdated

    Rotten to the core
    Remember you to will be judge and a whole lot more

    What does your rap sheet say
    Did you forget about your crimes till this day

    White men this White men that
    Black men this Black men that
    Have some of us forgetten the fact

    Like my spiritual sister pointed out only one man suffer the most
    And we wanna say we blacks suffer the most

    Yeah well let me see the thorns that were made of crown
    Let me see the picture of your mother wearing a frown

    Tears that her child is giving up his life
    Show me the letters of pain, grief and strife

    Show me the blood that you bleed
    Show me the spot you bled where weeds

    Now grow
    Show

    Me the beatings and lashings you recieved
    Show me the scraping as the beating knock you to the knees

    Show me the chatisment being called a liar
    Some of ya'll aint even experienced being under fire

    Show me the place where you was tempted
    Tell me the time when you said Get behind me Satan and didnt exempted

    Because he told you this burden you didnt have to bear
    I ask do you care

    If you teach your children all the hate that's been displayed
    Its sad that God has lost his only begotten Son and yet were in dismay

    About the truth
    It's not about you

    Its about the sacrifice and I wonder if any of us qualify to be the lamb
    Some of us better stop promoting hatred or else be damned

    When Jesus return which side will you be on
    Will you be strong

    And kneel before the King and say what the man said to him at the last hour
    Lord will you remember me
    The signs are around us and Satan demise is stronger I see

    Are we to ignore the calling and not get on the boat
    Are some us gonna let our soul be afloat

    Because when the ship arrive will you go
    If given the chance will you know

    To get on or dismiss it as being false like before
    Once it closes destruction will come and this Wicked Earth will be no more

    So I ask show me the tears Mary wept
    Show me the pain that she felt
    Show me the scars that are noticeable welts

    Show me the stake you died on
    If you can prove this to me I promise to leave you alone

    Until then my sistas', my brothas'

    Who are we to judge?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well stated , well pose'd
    this leak like da single red rose.

    One so , not judge or be judged cause judgement day is coming
    for every walk of life ........surely noone can stand and say or show
    such no one ......tyte mental drop i feel ya on this flow deeply........
     
  3. nevar

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    thank you rich for your constant support for me. :love:
     
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    Dam sister that was deep
    You are truely great at writing
    Loved the depth of your pen
    Much Love Sister Nevar
     
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    great poem nevar....i felt it...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    This was such a gret write.
    It really makes to think about
    the things you say since no one
    walking this earth is perfect.
     
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    So hot, so true. Flo on poet.
    One love
     
  8. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to tantrum thanks for the love shown always

    to Khasm 13 glad you approved

    to sweet babyface thanks for entering my world

    and to skrybble thanks for showing this sista some love
    :love: :thanks:
     
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    Hi nevar
    You brought up some very strong points in this flow sis
    That only adds to the richness of your message
    Not knowing it. The children are taught hate, just from the events
    That comes into our lives trying to live,
    Indeed it is a burden and a responsibly that we all much be apart of
    My sister I could just go on and on, but I really want to say that this is a very great poem and I do feel the vibe in your flow


    Peace and Love
     
  10. nevar

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    bluewater thanks for the love that was shown. and the critique as well. thanks.
     
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