Quiet Poetry Lounge : Who am I? ...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by queentswana, Nov 15, 2004.

  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who am I?

    I'm the water, that makes your body "wet"
    one splash, and it's "me" ...you'll never forget.
    :spinstar:
    I lay to your skin, like a second layer,
    don't fight it, I'm "water"...the other player.
    :spinstar:
    Think of the wonders, I can do to you,
    now need you ask ...of the "wonders" I do?
    :spinstar:
    Turn me "hot", or you can turn me "cold",
    whatever you do...you're in control.
    :spinstar:
    Do you know who I am?

    I'm the "suds"...that cover your skin,
    I slide in places ...others never been.
    :spinstar:
    I remove the dirt, from head to toe,
    and there's no part of you ...I won't go.
    :spinstar:
    Let me roll gently, down your spine,
    and it's legal too ...it's not a crime.
    :spinstar:
    There's plenty of me ...to cover you,
    and that's exactly what ...I'm here to do.
    :spinstar:
    I'll be here for you ...each and every day,
    to turn "hot or cold" ...whenever you say.
    :spinstar:
    Who am I?
    Yes,
    ...I'm your :spinstar: "soap and water" :spinstar:
     
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    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
     
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    [email protected]! That was creative, fun, and a thought provoking scribe Sister!
    Especially for those who might forget to use the soap and water.

    I just loved it! I think I'm going to learn this one and recite it to my son. Since I am always telling him to wash your butt! :laugh:
     
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    wash wash wash !!!!!!!!!!!
    dis was on point of who one is really
    whewwwwwww! hand me the soap
    is that water mines ?
     
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    [email protected] Sort of sounds like you're a basic necessity, Queent. Am I on the right track with that? As always, enjoying your flow.
     
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    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    A True Original

    One of the keys of success longevity is to continuously create original things, but the wisdom of how to create one thing original comes with years of righteous struggle and self-less giving. This is a truly original song/poem, an Afrikan lullaby, a song of desire, ode of devotion...all those things and more.
    !!!!OutStanDing!!!!
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected] ...I surely understand that, when they're at a certain age.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected]
    and to think, water is plentiful, thanks for the luv given
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I did enjoy doing this one, thanks for the drop in.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks a lot for your outstanding reply, I'm happy to know you enjoyed reading it.