Black Poetry : Who Am I

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  1. givemefreedom

    givemefreedom Member MEMBER

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    Who AM I
    Am I the sun that warms your heart in the morning or, the moon that creasses your eyes at night?

    Maybe I'm
    just that whisper of passion that you long and lust for.

    AM I
    that ocean of chocolate that you forbid yourself to taste.

    Maybe I'm
    Just that paradise you wish for when you close your eyes at night

    Who AM I?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done poet
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DIS YO GURL, HECK YEA! I WAS FEELIN DAT, AND IT KINDA REMINDED ME OF MYSELF, THINGS DAT I BE FEELIN, BUT I WAS REALLY FEELIN IT, SO FLO ON WITH NONSTOP

    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    uppin dis one back
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So many questions that long for answers, I guess what we are to other people is only what we allow them to feel. Hate to say this was deep, cause that sounds ingenuine, but this was...
     
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    Very talented poet
    You reach out for real
    This was hot poet
    We are all searching for answers
    Beatuiful Piece-Much Love
     
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    ZaKiYa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great and smooth--- wonderful and thoughtprovoking.

    I wondered so many times - I'm just not getting a glimpse to the answers.


    I wrote a piece about who i am awhile back..