Black Poetry : Who Am I Compromised

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  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Who am I compromised?

    I'm undefined
    Suspended in time
    Losing my mind
    Unable to shine
    Stagnant, invisible
    Mentally miserable
    Drained and strained
    And goin insane
    Shamed, unfamed
    One drop in the rain
    Can't see me
    Can't be me
    My soul lost completely

    I exist in non-existence

    Compromised, I'm nothing.

    If that!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow

    nice peace good strong concept and outstanding word play
    and remember you r something and somebody you are a part of this purpose
    this overall purpose to define and understand life .....flow on write on speak on and keep on loving you and the world will understand...peace
     
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    Whaaat!

    That's what's up! Compromised I'm nothing, if that!

    That is raw.

    ~Ikoro
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Miss Lady surely u are compromised to be u , finding self to be self
    is a compromised to see one is more then any , we all get lost in facts
    of self and become our worse follige

    great post look to read more from u soon and share poetic vibes
     
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    Feeling You


    Miss Lady, I can dig it... :SuN017:
     
  7. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    this is my daily reminder ......

    :)
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    keep pushing poet

    you have to

    IS ALL MENTAL

    you have to change your thought process and don't sink with the negative

    swings of energy

    i went a little deeper than i wanted to go

    lol
     
  9. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    dig deep

    lol...

    i'm diggin real deep...

    deep down....

    inside...

    it's hard DSS....

    love you!
     
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    Hi Sis
    I'm a member of this club..lol
    Sometimes we all get
    caught up in time, and be losing our mind
    just so we can find ourselves.
    Very awesome drop sis
    Keep it coming

    Peace~N~Love
     
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