Black Poetry : Who Am I Compromised

[MRS. LADY]

Who am I compromised?

I'm undefined
Suspended in time
Losing my mind
Unable to shine
Stagnant, invisible
Mentally miserable
Drained and strained
And goin insane
Shamed, unfamed
One drop in the rain
Can't see me
Can't be me
My soul lost completely

I exist in non-existence

Compromised, I'm nothing.

If that!

 

[watzinaname]

We can sometimes compromise to the point of becoming strangers to our own selves. Appreciated the way you posed this message, poetess.
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[mistaliberator]

nice flow

nice peace good strong concept and outstanding word play
and remember you r something and somebody you are a part of this purpose
this overall purpose to define and understand life .....flow on write on speak on and keep on loving you and the world will understand...peace

 

[Ikoro]

Whaaat!

That's what's up! Compromised I'm nothing, if that!

That is raw.

~Ikoro

 

[$$RICH$$]

Miss Lady surely u are compromised to be u , finding self to be self
is a compromised to see one is more then any , we all get lost in facts
of self and become our worse follige

great post look to read more from u soon and share poetic vibes