Black Poetry : white wallls

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    admist the sky i see stars shine
    gazing into darkness i see light bright
    searching for peace i have found friction
    evaluationg my prospects and process
    i learned that beauty comes in tomorrow
    hope with faith in prgress
    not survival. not survivors. no liars.
    silently i take hours to myself
    dedicating time mastering inner thoughts
    over clouded by words, expressions
    and maybe's, should have, or will do
    but yes i can.
    watching the breeze through hour glass
    figures, brown strong nature
    swaying with no fear, speaking
    volumes no one will ever hear
    absorbing the drops echo on pond
    meadows, backyard swamp's treasure
    pouring on window seal
    softly
    leaving my sleep calm and still
    admist nature
    i live
    laid out i find love in
    white walls that speak volumes
    leaving space for images
    to appear
    growth
    strength
    freedom
    my thoughts with GOD
    midnight dream talks to love
    fears and grief
    despair and destiny
    love lost gained but cherished
    all held captive between white cavities
    three walls plastered by my emotions
    imprinted by my feelings
    yet blank
    written on by my soul
    pen man ship sunk deep for dark ages
    yet nature calls clean pure
    simple by means of completion
    complex by observance
    visuals that employ me
    motivated by practicing craft within
    colliding with the elegance of nature
    the untouched breathe of preserverance
    the beauty of surprise
    kept close with my pallet
    embellished with color
    from rainy moments
    days that awake me
    my grateful spirit
    admist boundaries i soar.
    miles.
    write lengths
    and learn volumes.
    imprinted around me. ​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya pen is scribing sweet today ....wow !
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    paint your picture sista brethren

    your picture of life
    your vision

    a never ending painting of growth

    and peace

    peace poet

    :great::great::great::great::great:
     
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    between the white walls...

    ...of mental projections...lie contented sighs over continual lies and heated bliss and not-so-normal trysts for tomorrow wishes. I HEAR YOU...lying in the confines of the white walls...AS THE TAPESTRY UNFURROWS.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really appreciated the layers that you wrote these verses in...just like the layers of life that you wrote about I believe. Colorful pages of a scrapbook, with many empty pages yet to fill. Intricately penned.
     
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    from the beginning
    to the end
    youre writing has grown so much sister... :read:
    and its a pleasure to read :) :read:
     
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