Black Poetry : White lace promises

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    White lace promises
    As his soul calls mine
    Everlasting of a something
    That cant be define
    Burning……..
    Passion of an essence
    Fills the air
    beginning to live….

    A paradise just for two
    And it hurts so bad….
    And feels so good
    Intertwine into a embrace
    Of a perfect dream…
    Reaching for it all
    Climbing the mountain high
    Loving the feeling
    The joy of him is the
    Strength of me…

    Within a vision of
    A perfect ional
    Smooth ballet slow
    Dance around the
    White lace promises
    Purple heavens
    And bright starz
    Pearl of love
    Queen of heart
    King of all my world
    For I take your hand
    In this foundation of
    …………..Everlasting
    White lace promises


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  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' how sweet it is
    this was beautifully
    laid out in white lace
    like da ribbon of love
    tyte drop sistah Angel
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    coming from the man of love
    who writes sweet scribes
    its a honor
    so happy you
    enjoyed thank you :blush:
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    sister mba,
    You did it to us once again,
    Blessed us with your beauty of words

    :cool:
    Nita
    :heart:
     
  5. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was so pretty.
    A very beautiful piece.
    Lovin' it.
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If you promise ma a rose...
    I go out and but a pot.
    My imagination grows...
    Into roses by the plot.

    I once read that somewhere...I feel this one.
    deep in the :heart: of :love:

    with luv comming to ya...queentswana
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A rose of a promise!
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nita..aww sis thanks for all your support
    thank you you so sweet.....

    thatgirl74..thanks glad ya likes

    queentswana..thanks happy you enjoyed this one

    1poetsought..yes indeed thanks for comin by showing
    dat poet love poetically

    Peace yall
    Angel
     
  9. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WoW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Babygirl!!!!!!!! You have me seeing all kinds of estatic stars and stuff. This is indeed gorgeous and i'm diggin it. Many blessings to you and your blessed pen. Much love ma.
     
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    This was just plain pretty, keep the flow going.
     
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