Black Poetry : White Girl Stuck In A Black Girl's Body(edited version)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SensualReality, Jul 21, 2004.

  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ugh you know what I can't stand my skin
    I wish it was bright instead of this dark tent
    These big lips...ew I hate them
    I can't wear a lot of lips gloss or red lip stick
    My hair is so mother freakin' nappy!
    I got a perm,but I don't like the itch or burn
    The process stinks and it's too long
    My butt looks like a watermelon and a half
    The way it sticks out is so disgusting
    And when I walk it moves!
    The biggest things I hate about my body are my eyes and nose
    Why can't my eyes be blue or green?
    Why is my nose so round and flat?
    You know when I was little I asked my mom
    Why wasn't I born white?
    You know what she did?
    Smacked the dog crumbs out of me and said,"Because you're black."
    I also hate how black people talk
    They don't even use complete sentences
    Let alone real words from the DICTIONARY
    And the guys oh my gah,lets not get on their subject
    They are so thuggish and ghetto
    They are dogs and they stink
    The females....they're just down right whores
    Nasty little sluts that wear ugly hairstyles and clothing
    And my family oh my gaaaah
    Dammit you know what forget this
    If Michael can do it so can I!
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmmm...interesting
    you paint a very disturbing
    picture here...about as
    disturbed as these types
    of individuals are...for you
    must be "disturbed", insane...
    just plane crazy to not see
    the absolutely, undeniable
    Beauty of the Black Nation...
    you put us in the mind...
    of those types of people...

    So, so sad to have
    such a lost existence...
    flow on poet...flow on...
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...interesting...i liked it...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep twisted scribe i feel ya
    and i mean whoaaaaaaaaa!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unfortunately this is the truth for some, never seeing the true beauty, both inside and out. This made me pause, and smh. This caught my attention.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHAT SHE JUST EXPRESSED UNCONSCIOUSLY THE WAY SOME OF US FEEL DANG GIRL FOR SO LONG WE THOUGHT WHITE GIRLS WAS THE BOMB WITH LONG NOSES FLAT ASSEES AND THIN LIPS WITH MOPPY HAIR BUT NO THAT'S WRONG BLACK WOMEN COME IN ALL COLORS EVERYONE NOW INCLUDING THE JAPANESE AND CHINESE ARE TRYING TO BE BLACK WE TOOK A SLANG GHETTO LANGUAGE AND MADE IT UNIVERSAL OUR ART IS NOW LOOKED UP TO WORLDWIDE
     
  7. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FLOW ON MY BUDDYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!

    Itz so...sensual!But let me tell ya smtg;itz just on ya mind!For me,the best female,the more attractives,are my good black one!I like their curves!They have a sweet mouth (when u kiss one,awwww,u r far away)!I like the way they dress!They know how to express themselves!U r very beautiful,its not worth it to walk away of that fact!I've tried many type of girls:the asian,the white,the black!My best experiment was...with black!The problem is that it seems like they wanna show us that what isn't white ain't good!I wanna say NO!See'em,white girls,tryin' to dress the same as our sistas!See 'em,white girls,tryin' to behave like our sistas!See'em,white girls,seekin' n seekin' again ur ******!Just understand that be BLACK,WHITE or YELLOW,is not really important.Just feel free in ya skin!
    Take this peek from ya buddy
    Lloyd :toast:
     
  8. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, let's just say...Michael got the money, ...do you? if so, light your way to white, only to come back tained.
    Very, very interesting piece.
     
  9. lil'MizzUnique

    lil'MizzUnique Active Member MEMBER

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    that was really different..I loved it
     
  10. MrBlak

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    Disturbing.......but well done!!
     
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