Black Poetry : White Candy Rain

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  1. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet in its drops...
    A thump with every stop...
    The White Candy Rain....
    UP against my window pane.

    Every taste is greater than better.
    Every drop makes you jitter.
    Bringing forth that glow, that glitter.
    Signing names to love letters.

    A nectar that is yet to be defined...
    Every drop spaced between timelines
    Of a countdown,
    Will it it bring a down pour?
    White Candy Rain that looks like s'mores.

    Sweet in its drops...
    A thump with every stop...
    The White Candy Rain....
    UP against my window pane.

    Easing away the noise...
    Of released tension, from a tense poise.
    Drilling through walls of pain...
    The Down pour of white candy rain.

    Sweet in its drops...
    A thump with every stop...
    The White Candy Rain....
    UP against my window pane.

    Like piano keys, It relaxes me...
    With a tune, Made for june...
    At the end of spring, when MotherNature is in full bloom.
    And the earth is uplifting.

    See the essense of its purity.
    Is sewn in its beauty.
    Which defines its quality.
    Making it so dreamy.

    Those...
    Sweet in its drops...
    A thump with every stop...
    The White Candy Rain....
    UP against my window pane.

    Made special in every stop...
    A different sound w/every drop.
    The White candy rain
    Up agains my window pane.

    Sweet in its drops...
    A thumb with every stop...
    The White Candy Rain....
    UP against my window pain.
     
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    White Candy Rain...dis was sweet...i likes....
     
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    feelin this
    GOD BLESS :coffee:
     
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    welcome to the poetry forum sista
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! dis was tyte ya pen been missed
    happy to read ya again
     
  6. shaneak

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    Thanks everyone... I'm glad you all liked it... the thought was ice, snow, rain(sleet).. those pretty crystals on winter days.

    Rich: its good to get your read and feedback... I see you're still holding down the pen!! :)
    Thank you
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Something to bring sunshine to these cold, rainy, snowy, winter days...

    Glad it did it for ya!!! :d
     
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