Poetry Critiques : white/black haiku

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this was nice, but negative toward what is nuture color black
when the light go out we all see darkness of black which is a beautiful
and the reverse flip of white/black

white
Thy ghost reflection
driver of greed upon thy
people devilish

black
radiant within
dark as night beautifully
mixture of color
 
$$RICH$$ said:
welcome to destee.com true and honest critique & workshop

this was nice, but negative toward what is nuture color black
when the light go out we all see darkness of black which is a beautiful
and the reverse flip of white/black

white
Thy ghost reflection
driver of greed upon thy
people devilish

black
radiant within
dark as night beautifully
mixture of color

I am feeling you on that!! Love your reversal on turning that negative into a positive!!
 

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