Black Poetry : Whispers....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

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    Love whispers in the dark
    That two hearts embarked
    On a once in a life time dream
    Trapped inside your love
    Like a lost maze
    Within a heavens blaze
    You took me through a deep maze
    Of what love could be

    Like a mystery movie
    Thrills that delivered chills
    That a pill can’t cure
    As we endure
    In this love affair of us
    As my passion screams
    To be release…untouched
    But touched
    Mentally
    Emotionally
    Spiritually
    …yet untouched
    My dream placed me in your arms
    Long ago…

    The whisper of vision
    Dressed in white
    Walking to my king
    My chocolate delight
    As we shine bright
    Within our love
    The maze takes us on top of the world
    Where only you and I resided

    (c) 2005
    short thought flow
     
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    wooooooweeeeeee!
    i can run wit thee
    take this to a level 3
    where top love is
    uncovered from the maze
    and set off a blissful blaze :eeek:

    becareful poetess whewww! like dis here drop Angel Cakes
     
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    run with thee
    upon the moon
    across the skyz
    within the orbs...
    run with thee
    level 3....
    i bet you can
    as i take it to leve 4
    lets rock and roll...
    see in heaven's nights
    the whisper was heard
    thank you suga cakes!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    u can rock level 4
    but i have an encore
    of whispers beat
    a tone to make u feast
    have u dancing on ya feet
    singing take me ! take me !
    i wanna be so let go into
    dis maze and set off a blazin glaze
    tap tap compassion twin
    beware how deep i can sin
    yet a child of thee and
    sweet as can be like cloud 9
    it's feaverish tyme ....in shine
     
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    two of kin
    about to mend
    into one within
    untouched grace
    prance and dance
    as we lace in a whisper
    of love
    after the encore
    we can do more
    yanno???
     
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    well well !!!!!
    big ups to dis dip here whewwwwww!
     
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    Yeah, I must say...it's an awesome piece, I can see, feel and relate to every word.
    And I say that, in the loudest..."whisper"
     
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    Peacem my Queen,

    This is a beautiful & insightful scribe...........makes me feel that anyone in your presence has no choice but to shine bright & be a reflection of you!!

    makes me feel all chocollaty inside!! :kiss1:

    peace
     
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    Thank you my Richness
     
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    I am happy you enjoyed the scribe...thank you
     
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