Black Poetry : Whispers

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  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She gave you a phone number
    She seemed eager for your call
    She says "a dub for a dance
    Or, with some yards you can touch and all"
    Wearing the shortest shorts to tease you
    Making you want to see them fall
    So sexy and so accessible
    Breaking all sorts of laws

    So you dial her number
    Catch her voice, sounding sweet
    Then, with little hesitation
    You explain to her your needs
    Expectations start to swell
    As you think of what will be achieved
    Indulgence, banging the cage
    You are going to set it free

    She says, "let's make this happen"
    Just the words you needed to here
    She sees green papers and gets naked
    You hold them up and she comes near
    She shows no reservation
    You see she has no fear
    She tells you how she'll earn it
    Whispers it in your ear

    Money granted you access
    Time provided you the chance
    With your remote you press play
    And then she begins to dance
    You massage her supple bosoms
    You jiggle them with your hands
    She squats and grinds in your lap
    She can feel the bulge in your pants

    "Take off your shirt", she speaks
    With no delay you oblige
    Soon something good will happen
    You can see it in her eyes
    She tells you to free your nature
    Says she wants to see it rise
    You see she has its satisfaction
    As your hands spread her thighs

    You see she knows what she's doing
    It almost appears routine
    She speaks and moves so freely
    So arousing and so obscene
    She then does all she said she'd do
    And, anything thing you can dream
    Making you feel like "the man"
    Just because your paper is green

    JAG ©2005
     
  2. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've revised this one since i originally posted...
    What do you think, family?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    she was deep sweet and divine
    he was her morning sunshine
    this was well done i like it flow head on A.....
     
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    Expressive kind of piece
    thanx for sharing.
     
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    WHISPERS is one mean, green machine!

    Back on top where it rocks! :toast:
     
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    nice.......... :smokin:
     
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    thanks for the sexual ride. im completely satified! very good poem.
     
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