Black Poetry : Whispers

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet whispers heard
    cross da night
    where love take off in flyte

    hearts beat at a pace
    smiles seen on her face
    tracing the motion
    her romantic beat
    dancing to da poetic treat

    air mass summer breeze
    spring tyme begun
    her blossom bloom
    i ask again
    who is she
    what's her name
    how can it be !!!!!

    whispers swoops
    on high maze
    body yearn
    mind crave
    her gentlness
    was da beat
    my heart in defeat
    she's a treat of unknown
    where souls of love
    wish to roam

    cotton candy sweet
    ravished & devined
    silky satin posed
    i tenderly offer dis rose
    whisper to dance
    it was my last chance
    so i whisper again & again !!
    slowly kiss her neck
    wooooooooo!!!!!
    left a chill and what a thrill
    i truely feel

    where is she now !?
    just like that
    gone !in a whisper :eek:
     
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    I tell ya, this was tyte. They always seem to disappear huh? You need to read her some of that sweet poetic verse, she'll be stuck to you like glue.


    I'm just sayin...
     
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    Brother Man, I guess you just can't own a woman-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    Dream Weaver i think i'll drop a few line on her
    and see if that can work..........Thankz sista

    hey lpoet......... man it's gonna get better coz i'm bout to
    drop some love flowz on her dis tyme hope she feel me..
    word up !!!!!!!
     
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    cross da mass
    my heart roam
    seeking
    searching
    feelin for home
    at last i see
    ya gentle face
    trace ya soul
    that makes me whole
    so we dance in romance
    ova som' jazz
    night long dis will last
    yes i sweep fast & correct
    my love raw sweet & wet
    so in a whisper i here to stay
    let do it ya tender way !!!
     
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    Here I am, Back again I hope you have a master plan..
    I've been waiting for awhile for that Sexy Blak Mann Smile...
    I told you before and I'll say it again, I'm here standing in the wind.....come and find me if you can befor I become water to the sand.....
     
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    Women are like whispers and like the wind...

    Women are like whispers and like the wind my friend.
    You never really know where they might come from and
    where they might end.
    They carress you and tantalize you and cause you to lean in pleasure...and just as you reach out to grasp...they are gone
    with not an inch to measure!
    Just a memory to treasure...whispers are verbal carresses that tantalize the ear...the wind is mother earth's beckoning for you to come here...women are God's gift not for ownership but to treasure...and just as you reach out to grasp they are gone with not an inch to measure!
    This was simply beautiful Richy Rich! Simply beautiful!
    Smooches
    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    dude,
    your first poem sounds like a night that i had at the sinibar.shoo u right...that piece was tight....
     
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    do dat love thang, Rich!
    poetry in motion.
     
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    on the clouds...

    :)
     
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