Black Poetry : whispers in daylight

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hear
    whispers
    that remind me of sweet nothings u
    used to

    re
    it
    er
    at
    e

    to me--
    the
    on-ly
    difference is that i hear them everywhere

    and I can't stop hearing them--
    and I don't want to--
    all i want is you
    near
    me.

    I hear whispers
    in broad daylight
    whispers from you that were usually
    restricted to darkness
    and closely associated with
    long sensual passionate moments--

    in which
    i please u
    and you please me
    and
    we please
    'it'
    being
    a

    de
    si
    re

    reined betwixt the sunlight's rays--
    unleashed under the covers of night...
    carted off
    in memory

    of a
    long deceased
    us.


    (itdidn'thavetobethisway)

    sean.again

    thereturnoftheancientfuturebrothas
    vocab.authentic.quest.xpliss.
     
  2. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sean

    I've heard similar whispers man and I couldn't have said it betta than this!!!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    seany.


    ...becoming entwined in your vibe once more has
    caused my heart to smile... real big!! :D

    thank you for sharing... i love-did it!!

    alwayspeace&Love...

    elayne.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well posed poet!! the ring of thoughts
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sean

    as usual you had me at the first line.....






    One
     
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    Reas...
    thanks for the reply coz. I 'preciate it...

    peace

    sean.again.
     
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    GA...

    tank ya fa' readin'....

    sean.again
     
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    RICH...

    I 'preciate the read bruh...as always.

    sean.again
     
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    Nice Scribe Poet!!

    I've heard these whispers before but didn't know quiet well how to put it down...Now I don't have too thanks to you!! Tyte Piece!!
     
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