Black Poetry : Whispers II

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  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You didn't have to say a word
    Because she got the gist
    The way she exposed her tounge
    Move it slowly across her lips
    She saw the green papers in your hand
    They were so big and crisp
    Enough to make what you wanted
    Much too hard to resist

    She gave you a phone number
    She seemed eager for your call
    She says "a dub for I'll dance,
    With some yards you can touch and all"
    Wearing the shortest shorts to tease you
    Making you want to see them fall
    So sexy and so accessible
    Breaking all sorts of laws

    So you dial her number
    Catch her voice, sounding sweet
    Then, with little hesitation
    You explain to her your needs
    Expectations start to swell
    As you think of what will be achieved
    Indulgence, he's banging his cage
    Tonight you're going to set him free

    Temperature in the room is rising
    You see the hazy mist
    She is leaning in towards you
    You're puckering to kiss
    Now you are sucking on her neck
    And she starts clinching fist
    You begin unbuttoning her blouse
    Soon it's falling from her wrist

    She says, "let's make this happen"
    Just the words you needed to hear
    She sees green papers, gets butt-naked
    You hold them up and she comes near
    She shows you no reservation
    You can see she has no fear
    Starts telling you how she'll earn it
    Softly, whispering into your ear

    Money granted you access
    Time provided you the chance
    With your remote you press play
    And then she begins to dance
    You massage her supple bosoms
    You jiggle them with your hands
    She grinds in your lap knowing
    What's she's growing in your pants

    "Take off your shirt", she speaks
    With no delay you oblige
    Soon something good will happen
    You see it, there in her eyes
    Telling you to free your nature
    Saying she wants to help it rise
    You feel her moist satisfaction
    Stroking fingers between her thighs

    It seems she knows what she's doing
    It almost appears routine
    She speaks and moves so freely
    So arousing,... so obscene
    She then does all she said she'd do
    And, anything thing you can dream
    Making you feel like "The Man"
    Just because your paper is green
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you truly are a gifted writer. please continue to flo on poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was smooth and felt
    from the green paper back
     
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    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Everyone wanted more from my original post of this piece, so here's the rest of the story
    I'm glad u like
     
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    I love this golddigger piece!
     
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    Got me thinking about that song Gold Digger too! Good Write.
     
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