Black Poetry : WHISPERS from within

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well it had 3 names i dont like none of them dont fit...so its untitled..anyideals

    Wings unfold and breath taken
    The passage to her heart
    within her mind
    She feels your soul..
    Within her being how it
    ignites it
    on fire….
    Her heart belongs to you
    quietly she collects herself
    And exhale…
    The love in which is givein
    Moves the soul and release
    the spirit..as she receives…
    Thy rib of his backbone
    Held with in her being
    Connection made…
    Many come with offerings
    But the destiny have been set…
    And she stands with you
    and you only…as the skies sing
    and the angels dance…
    The gift of blessing
    The asking of all
    Unconditional love
    Heavens doors open
    this is where today starts
    Tomorrow begins and
    thy future
    Heads…
    As you feel the reality
    Within her
    guide her soul
    And hold her heart….
    completely
    Her love sweetens the air..
    As she accepts thy gift you
    Have place before her….
    she prays you never leave......


    pieces of untitle life
    a blackangel thang.....
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was a lovely chapter
    in the life...very nice
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Another soft & sweet flow.

    Very nice.
     
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    What beautiful images!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    too sweet i love this soft gentle vibe of ya pen
    sound like a title of ((WHISPERS from within))
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam for da love...love the support wow...:grouphug:

    and ya Royal Richness...i likes the title...so now it have a name..thank you..Angel
     
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    Moves the soul and release
    the spirit..as she receives…
    Thy rib of his backbone
    Held with in her being
    Connection made…


    this was beautiful sister...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelicsage my sister angel thank u glad you like...much love to ya..:angel1:
     
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    i am feeling Peace with this piece
    nice drop sis
     
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    Mzblkangel....... only your pen can close to your true bueaty! I lovethis one and it is felt inside.
     
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