Black Poetry : Whispers against my neck

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You call by accident you say,
    guess you must have been
    thinking about me today.
    Been to long since last
    we lingered over intellectucal
    intercourse and multiple
    orgasms.
    And I went to sleep with
    warm whispers against
    my neck.
    The warmth as comforting
    as a babies breath.
    You loved me to death.

    How do you call by accident
    I say, I know I "was" thinkging
    about you today.
    You still
    in denial, about loving me.
    and I remember foot rubs
    and dirty dancing, hot lava
    making loving.
    And I went to sleep with
    warm whispers against
    my neck.
    The warmth like a warm
    blanket after a winter
    storm...
    You loved me til
    I was born!

    And I miss those
    thought provoking
    sexual joking
    love making nights
    when I went to
    sleep with warm
    whispers against
    my neck.
    The warmth that would
    revive this comatose
    heart...
    And love me til
    I am reborn!

    BJS(C)2003:eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:
     
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    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let me be the first to appreciate this piece.

    Nice and sweet - makes me want to get in the covers
    and breathe and some girls neck for real !!! - LOL

    I liked this yo
     
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    tyte...

    think l might try dat one day :jawdrop:
     
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    gurl u know i'm into dis ......
    i will try it !!!
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's our own personal favorite of spooning...

    Ever wonder why the spooning position is so comfortable for couples besides the obvious warmth of the boote` againts the love zone...the closeness is almost symbionic, like in the womb it's as close as two people can get...and the late night conversations that you drift off to sleep in midsentence, the conversation is not always that important...but being held in such a way is! hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...I can feel it now as I imagine all the nights gone before....I miss that the most!
    Thanks for reading! I appreciate it when the brother's give me feedback!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    sista lb.


    "warm whispers against my neck"

    dayyyyyum!!!

    i Loved it!! ...this is one of those peaces
    that makes me say... "i wish i had thought
    of that!!" :D 'cause i second the emotion
    'bout what them whispers can do!! :wink:

    thanks for sharing. did i say i Loved this?

    alwayspeace & blessings on ya house,
    elayne.
     
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    I've done this. I've went to sleep with warm whispers on my neck! A great piece here.
     
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    I can totally relate. Great flow
    Speshly loving the lines:

    And I miss those
    thought provoking
    sexual joking
    love making nights
    when I went to
    sleep with warm
    whispers against
    my neck.

    Keep scribin.

    *Emma*
     
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    WOWWWWWWWWWWW

    DSS

    i need therapy
    yes lord

    LOL
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwwww! Thank you everyone!

    Even though I am still waiting to get back to that loving thang again, I keep hope alive by remembering all the positive things about having that special someone. So many times when we break up with someone we are so hurt and angry we just focus on the negatives which we know is not a true perception. Cause if they were so **** awful we would have never loved them. So spoon with you love tonight in this last burst of winter for us in the midwest and spoon ....:D :D

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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