Black Poetry : Whispering Yacht of the North Coast

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  1. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The dark cold calamity of a ruffled sea

    Rocked the wooden warped panels beneath me

    As I continued down stream

    Out of sight of the sunlight beam

    And not confident enough for the star lights gleam

    It’s brilliance upon me, could only be...

    A dream

    Until one night

    It showed it’s spotlight

    On a distant object

    In the farthest corner of the North sea

    Closer the object approached me

    Until we became two parallel doves…

    Merely Soft whispering ships passing in the night

    My little heart became so overflowed with it’s warm and tender glow

    Slowly and deliberately it pulled me in, as if on a toy string

    Carefully introducing me

    To Loving, lapping and balmy waters

    Of pure ivory, warm and comforting to the touch

    I pondered to myself….

    “Oh mesmerizing ship of many features”

    “What is it that you want with a little boat like me?”

    “When you could have the greatest yachts of the Earths 7 seas”

    “And have the respect of the oceans North breeze…”

    “Beautiful boat I have never seen….Why are you here with me?”

    The brilliant ship made love circles around me

    Leaving lace fingerprints to trail

    Hovering protectively over the murky waters of my past

    Cascading Eyes as glassy as crystal bells…

    The soft spoken canary healed all the cracks of my boards

    Refining them one by one

    And he would not stop until I begged of him

    To be drenched in his miraculous sun

    He rescued me from the North Coast completely out of sight

    He stole my heart like a whispering thief in the night

    He became my shipmate of love, and upon him the stars shown bright

    Im no longer a sailboat but a Yacht in his sight.

    I love you….
     
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    this was a very tingling sweet write sis.....enjoyed the read
     
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    man

    beautifully written

    i felt the essence for real here

    i'm not mad at the love

    baby


    be happy

    :donttell:
     
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    The visuals in this are quite beautiful, and to be mesmerized in the allure of a love like this is wonderful.
     
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    Awwwwwwwwww suki suki now LOL
    2 ships passing in the night huh :)
    This was a great read sister :)
     
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    Beautiful write...

    I really enjoyed reading this, it was warm and inviting.


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all....so glad you enjoyed it.:luvv:
     
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    SISTA SISTA APPLE PIE

    GURL, WHEN ARE YOU GONNA GIVE US A BREAK FROM ALL YOUR LOVELY POETRY?? YOU JUST KEEP GOING AND GOING, LOL, I MEAN, I JUST LOVE YOUR STUFF, KEEP DOIN WHAT YOU DO!:luvv:
     
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    intriguing story line....

    one love
    khasm
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks so much

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