Black Poetry : Whisper To Maria

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Calling...
    Just to be naughty
    Ain't no booty call
    Woke to see that body-
    No flaws!

    Dreaming...
    With Maria sleeping
    Wide awake in style ~
    Love done drove her wild

    I-m-p-r-e-s-s-i-o-n-s
    This love I'll be keeping
    In my life for a time
    All good love gets bound

    Hey baby...
    Now that you can feel me
    Whispering is wild!
    Sensual Latina (smile)

    No matter...
    Up against that body
    Your mind wins hands down
    Makes your chocolate proud

    Forbidden...
    Nothing being wasted
    What an almond joy
    Good and plenty
    Baby, baby-
    Boy!

    Crazy...
    Sunrise making babies
    Skipped work-
    To be your toy
    Wind me up I'm ready-
    Lord!

    P-E-A-C-E

    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww snap...you did with this one!!! I like!! I like....and I'm sure Maria will like it too.... :)
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You!

    SwtT, I always appreciate your winning ways-
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa !!!! now u drop a bomb here dis was str8 awesome tyteeeeeee!!
    man i love this piece gotta read it some mo !
    thanks for dis
     
  5. emprezz

    emprezz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ummmm, lucky Maria! I like this one. Sensual, sexxy, smooth as a shot of yak!

    Peace
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm lovin this....
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Know how good it feels to be appreciated? (I do.) Thanks!
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1PS you know you the bomb, I always appreciate your writing, especially this one. I wish I was your Maria, I wish someone would write me a love cancion....Sigh...(Dreamweaver, dreaming)
     
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    Boy!, did I love thiiiiiiiiiiiiis!
     
  10. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey 1POET,

    This is a wonderful piece!! I love it!!

    :toast: :toast: :toast:

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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