Black Poetry : whisper of thoughts.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Dec 6, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    His love is calm
    Puts me in a comfort zone
    Of our realm
    Easy to release…
    Please let this be true….
    His love is what I yearn
    Turnin and twistin
    In da wind…as we ride
    He blows my mind
    everytime..
    His love is peaceful
    A blessing given…..
    as I am
    Lost in his love
    Intertwinin in a dream
    Of once upon a time..
    Is he really mine?
    Mind is wondering
    And searching for da real…
    Because the deal is…
    I love him and only him…
    His love is my strength
    It pours thru my veins…
    Dancin on the wings
    of love
    A blaze with a bliss
    Flame on charge…..
    Foreseen eyes
    With the perfect notion
    Of perfection..
    emotions flowin
    as his affection
    reach within me..
    His love his love…..
    Awaken a bitter soul
    And uncovered a dark heart…
    He knew could love him back
    As he captured my mind
    And sent my heart in rapture..
    My spirit and soul lingers in his
    Essences….
    He calls me his
    rare black jewel
    But he is my
    rare unique jewel
    I want to tell him
    And let him know
    His love so soft and meek
    His voice makes me weak
    The rose he posed
    I hold it so dear….
    closed in a book
    wishin to tell him all I feel
    hoping he understands…
    I love him so….
    His love His love….
    Is it really mine……………
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i do feel the love in this nice flow
    very nice
    Peace
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    uncover the thoughts
    the love is cast
    truely he will not pass
    his love is true
    and awaits u
    so breathe light
    sleep at night
    things will be alright
    i had a vision

    this was tyte ....speaketh of da heart !
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so heartfelt. Very sweet and serene.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater..thankz for the showing love..glad you likes..

    $$RICH$$...Thoughts uncovered
    Heart on beam
    I trust your vision..thankz for your words..
    glad you likes my little poem

    watzinaname...at times you got to place
    your inner thoughts down..just let it flow
    it was from the heart where i flow...thanks for da love
     
  6. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh this is great I love your work :luvv:
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ASHANTA..thank you wow what a honor i am glad you likes..much love to you
    peace my sister....:angel1:
     
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