Black Poetry : whisper, my love

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  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whisper my name and I will hear you
    Speak in silence your love and I will
    Know the words that are carried on the
    Subtle breeze of fall is your love to me;

    Close your eyes and I will be there with
    My arms opened in the formation of your
    Frame and the glimmer in my eyes shine
    Bright the outline of heart shaped dreams;

    Inhale my love, never letting go of the
    Dance between past and future, eternal
    And momentary for the plans to love u
    Can only come from MY desire to exhale;

    Consume my love as I exude my trust to
    Form a foundation built on the strength
    Of life destined to walk, hand in hand,
    with you through the annuls of exultation;

    I could never find another to fulfill this
    Dream for I never authored the pages
    Just enjoyed the creation as I sat back
    Watching you slowly reclaim your home;

    Could I wait forever for you? Quite so for
    The days may be long but the love is longer
    For no matter the amount of time in today
    I rest will only be a teardrop in tomorrow.
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    twin,

    nice work as usual but let's come to an agreement okay. You can have 60 percent of the peace, I'll take 40 percent...Okay how 'bout 70/30 :laugh:

    keep flowin' twin
    blak
     
  3. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey...no problem...i can use the rest to bring some heat....

    thanks for the read...

    one.
     
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    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just

    beautiful!

    T
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read...

    one.
     
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    cindy....thanks for the read....it is always a pleasure
     
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    Dnommo

    This piece is Lovely
    poet.
    Thanks.:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man yo love one do feel
    coz what u bring is ever so real
    da deal is dis be tyght bru........flow head on!:D
     
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    rich and rashad,

    you two keep me lifted...i thank you for the read...

    and to all in da fam...mush respect

    one.
     
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